Harry Task Pool/allotment/woods Comment More work is needed to improve these sections the swimming pool images need

to be closer shown the real texture and dereliction of the environment. The allotment is good and has a rather dream like feel to them. The woods series lack impact there are too many perspective shots. well done well thought out analysis that shows good understanding of the project Again in depth analysis well done Good examples that fit the criteria well the texture picture is particularly strong This series is a good start but it lacks impact This idea has real potential and the images that you have taken are by far the strongest. In this series. Grade T-

Eugene Richards Nadav Kander Formal elements First development Second development

T T T TT

Interim Final piece

A good sense of juxtaposition but I think the second set are much stronger and so could be developed further.

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Wag - B/C Target - B Some good work your analysis is strong and the second development is good. However the first set of observation in the school are not as strong. It would increase your mark to revisit these environments.