ESSAY 2: DESCRIBE AN INTERESTING DAY IN SCHOOL

My name is Meena. I am 16 years old. I am a form four students. I have a

happy family. My father is a teacher. He is a good teacher. My mother is a doctor.
She is a very good doctor. I love my father and my mother. [48 words]
I study at SMK Pillus. My school is a famous school. My school is very big. I
like my school. My school is also very beautiful. All students like SMK Pillus. I like my
classmates. I also like my teachers. I like Mr. Hassan, Mr. Ching, Ms. Jane and Mdm.
Bibi. [51 words]
Yesterday was an interesting day in school. It was Teachers Day. I love
Teachers Day. All teachers were very happy. All students were also very happy.
Teachers Day was a special day in my school. We had a special programme
yesterday. [41 words]
Lim, Bala, Nasir and I played football with our class teacher. Our class teacher
was a handsome man. He was a very good teacher. Our class teacher was very
happy. We were also very happy. We played football at the school field. After playing
football, we played badminton. [48 words]
At 11.00 am, we went to the school hall. My school hall was big. The school
hall was also beautiful. All students were happy. It was a special day. Many teachers
sang songs. Our principal sang a rock song. He was very good. All students liked
him. [47 words]
Yesterday was a very interesting day to me. I love Teachers Day. [12 words]

SAMPLE 2: My ideal birthday party

P1
Myself
P2
My friends
P3
Last week was my birthday. It was my ideal birthday party
P4
Many people came to my party.
P5
Everybody enjoyed the party.
P6
I wish I will always have an ideal birthday party.