Dylan Campbell Review Article

by Dylan Campbell

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This is a good
place to start, but
it's not really a
review of the latest
research--you've
got some of the
research here,
though--good.

this is remarkably clear!

more white
space after
picture.

I think you can condense this section

Burning ethanol
releases CO2, just
like burning fossil
fuels does. What
difference do you
see?

do you mean,
a description
of such a
structure is
underway?

indicate that all of the following findings came from

one study.

what journal ?

Dylan Campbell Review Article

GRADEMARK REPORT
FINAL GRADE

GENERAL COMMENTS

84

Instructor

/200

PAGE 1

Text Comment.

T his is a good place to start, but it's not really a review of the latest
research--you've got some of the research here, though--good.

Text Comment.

this is remarkably clear!

Text Comment.

more white space af ter picture.

Text Comment.

I think you can condense this section

PAGE 2

Text Comment.

Burning ethanol releases CO2, just like burning f ossil f uels does. What
dif f erence do you see?

Comment 1
T his seems over simplif ied. You're still burning carbon-based f uel (producing CO2 f rom a
vegetable), and you're applying tons of nitrogenous f ertilizer to grow the vegetable. Best to
acknowledge and respond to such criticism; your work gains credibility this way.
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Text Comment.

do you mean, a description of such a structure is underway?

Text Comment.

indicate that all of the f ollowing f indings came f rom

one study.
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Text Comment.

what journal ?

RUBRIC: REVIEW ARTICLE RUBRIC 2

AUD. & PURP.

Prof icient

SLO #1: Write f ormally and inf ormally, in-class and out-of -class, f or a variety of audiences and purposes.
ABSENT/BELOW
BASIC

Audience's needs are of ten not recognized: terms and ideas either need explanation
or are over explained and language needs adjustment f or the journal's audience.
Purpose (to f amiliarize readers with research regarding a contemporary subject of
interest) isn't clear or achieved.

DEVELOPING

Shows some attention to audience's needs, sometimes def ining necessary terms and
ideas and using audience-appropriate language. Purpose (to f amiliarize readers with
research regarding a contemporary subject of interest) may be unclear at times, and it
may not be achieved convincingly.

PROFICIENT

Usually shows attention to audience's needs, def ining necessary terms and ideas
and using audience-appropriate language. Purpose (to f amiliarize readers with
research regarding a contemporary subject of interest) may be implied, but it's clear
and achieved.

ADVANCED

Shows sophisticated attention to audience's needs, def ining necessary terms and
ideas and using audience-appropriate language. Purpose (to f amiliarize readers with
research regarding a contemporary subject of interest) is clear and achieved with
style.

SOURCES

Developing

SLO #2: Find, evaluate, select, synthesize, organize, ethically cite, and present inf ormation f rom a variety
of sources appropriate to their disciplines.
ABSENT/BELOW
BASIC

Fails to use MLA- or APA-style parenthetical citations, quotation marks, and works
cited list as specif ied by journal. Frequently uses irrelevant or unpersuasive sources.

DEVELOPING

A f ew errors in MLA- or APA-style parenthetical citations, quotation marks, and works

cited list. Sometimes uses irrelevant or unpersuasive sources.

PROFICIENT

Almost always uses MLA- or APA-style parenthetical citations, quotation marks, and
works cited list as specif ied by journal. Use of sources is usually relevant and
persuasive.

ADVANCED

Correctly uses MLA- or APA-style parenthetical citations, quotation marks, and works
cited list as specif ied by journal. Use of sources is always relevant and persuasive.

PERSUASION

Prof icient

SLO #3: Compare, contrast, and synthesize caref ully and objectively the relative merits of alternative or
opposing arguments, assumptions, and cultural values.
ABSENT/BELOW
BASIC

Fails to demonstrate similarities and dif f erences between research of dif f erent
scholars. May be biased in presentation of research. Descriptions of research may be
unclear.

DEVELOPING

Sometimes demonstrates similarities and dif f erences between research of dif f erent
scholars. Attempts to synthesize this research caref ully and objectively. Some
descriptions may be unclear.

PROFICIENT

Usually demonstrates similarities and dif f erences between research of dif f erent
scholars with clarity. Synthesizes this research caref ully and objectively. Describes
the research, usually noting objectively merits of various procedures.

ADVANCED

Demonstrates similarities and dif f erences between research of dif f erent scholars
with clarity and sophistication. Synthesizes this research caref ully and objectively.
Describes the research, noting objectively merits of various procedures.

ORGANIZ AT ION

Advanced

SLO #4: Organize ones thoughts and communicate them clearly to address a rhetorical situation. Employs
IMRAD structure where appropriate.
ABSENT/BELOW
BASIC

Organizational devices (statement of purpose, headings, topic sentences,

transitions) may be absent, unrelated to the prompt, or illogically connected. Ps are
usually not unif ied or organized.

DEVELOPING

Organizational devices (statement of purpose, headings, topic sentences,

transitions) f it the prompt, but may be vague, too broad, or inconsistenly or illogically
linked. Ps may not be unif ied.

PROFICIENT

Clear, specif ic organizational devices (statement of purpose, headings, topic

sentences, transitions) f it the prompt and tie ideas together adequately.

ADVANCED

Clear, specif ic organizational devices (statement of purpose, headings, topic

sentences, transitions) f it the prompt and tie ideas together logically and seamlessly.

LANG & DESIGN

Prof icient

SLO #5: Recognize, evaluate, and employ the f eatures and contexts of language and design that express
and inf luence meaning and that demonstrate sensitivity to gender and cultural dif f erences.
ABSENT/BELOW
BASIC

T one and/or design usually suggest/s an absence of awareness of audience and/or

generic conventions. Spelling, syntax, diction, or punctuation errors impede
readability.

DEVELOPING

T one and/or design are/is sometimes inappropriate or unconventional. Spelling,

syntax, diction, or punctuation errors impede readability or otherwise distract f rom
meaning.

PROFICIENT

Appropriate tone and design conf orm to assigned audience and genre. Spelling,
syntax, diction, or punctuation errors are f ew and do not distract f rom meaning.

ADVANCED

Sophisticated tone and design engage reader and conf orm to assigned audience and
genre. Outstanding control of language, including ef f ective diction and sentence
variety.