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John Lynch
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playing a huge role in my college search. I have to be able to cheer on a good basketball team
and if not that, I at least want to cheer on a good football team.
The cost has to be just about average or less than average because my family cannot afford to
pay for a very expensive university .I believe that around 30,000 dollars would be the realistic
amount to pay for a good education. Of course, the college has to have my majors that I am
interested in. I might go in as undecided but I am strongly considering marketing or sports
management. Only a few schools have sports management programs so it is hard to find a school
that may have both programs that are of interest to me.
The first college that I visited was James Madison University. I did not know how
attractive their campus was until I visited others because I had no baseline. But after a couple
months of the college search, I realized that the campus was more beautiful than many others in
comparison. The day that I visited, the students were relaxing on the lawn of the quad. There was
one group of people that were lying on their hammocks and others were playing a game of
Ultimate Frisbee. It was such a laid- back atmosphere and thats how I want to be in college.
That day, I also attended a football game with my family. The school spirit was amazing and
almost the entire school was in session. At the beginning of the game, there were cannons that
shot off to signal the kick- off and the school sang their fight song. Every touchdown the crowd
threw purple and gold streamers. It was really a great memory and an amazing athletic
atmosphere. I also attended one of the basketball games when I came back during the winter but
it was not as exciting as the spectacular football game. The school is also a perfect size for my
liking; coming in around 18,000 students. It is not so big that there is large class sizes but not so
small that the sports program is irrelevant. Another great thing about the school is that the
distance from home is just around a two hour drive, which is ideal. Its close enough that I can
drive there and back from home and far enough that my parents will not visit me all the time.
JMU also has both a good marketing program in their nationally ranked business school and it
has a sports management program which is hard to find. The cost is right in my price range too.
It is right around 20,000 dollars (JMU) and I hope to get a good amount of money for
scholarships. My parents are helping me pay so its not like I will have to pay all 20,000 dollars a
year for education. One negative thing about this college is that it is located in the small city of
Harrisonburg. Harrisonburg is not comparable to even the size of a suburb of DC, like Rockville.
There may not be any good internship programs in the Harrisonburg but since it is a nationally
ranked business school, there will be lots of opportunities to make connections with businesses
in nearby cities and areas. James Madison might be my first choice in colleges at this moment
because it does not have that many flaws.
The next college that I am strongly considering attending is the University of Delaware.
When I visited the college in the spring, I had the most amazing tour guide possible and she told
us about all of her experiences in college. She was also a marketing major in Delawares
business school. That was good for me so I could learn more about what marketing was and I got
to hear why she chose that major. I knew that I wanted to do something in business but when she
talked about marketing, it helped me choose what type of business major I might pursue. It
wasnt as nice of a day when I visited the campus so I couldnt see as many students walking
around campus or relaxing on the quad like I did see at James Madison. It also is a little on the
expensive side tuition-wise. To attend the university, it is around 30,000 dollars.(UDel) That does
not include room and board which would make this college one of the most expensive ones that I
am looking at. Even thought the cost is expensive, I am still drawn to the college because of the
size and location of the campus. Around 18,000 students attend Delaware which is just around
the same amount of my top choice; James Madison. Although the college seems exceptional for
me on the surface, it might not be my top choice. The business program is just not as prestigious
as James Madisons. On the other hand, the college is located in one of the biggest cities in
Delaware. I did not get the full blast of the athletic atmosphere because I did not attend any
basketball or football games but both of those teams are decent in Delaware. The college is one
of my top choices because it is very similar to my requirement for colleges.
Salisbury is my last choice of schools out of my top four. I chose it as a fall back school
just in case I dont get into my top three or I cant pay for the cost of my top three. Even though
it is my fall back school, it is still a decent college and a good place to get an undergraduate
degree. It is a very small school and is a little too small for my liking. It only has about 8000
students enrolled in the university and the class sizes are very small which gets you in a position
to have a good relationship with your professors. Its a little too cost for my comfort. The cost is
also an amazing price for a good education. It is around 5,000 dollars (Salisbury) which is a very,
very cheap price for education these days. It is also in a smaller city in rural Maryland, which is
not the best place to be for a good business school but it does have a marketing program. Another
negative factor is that the athletic atmosphere is not as great as my other top college choices
because it is a Division III school. The sports program is good, but not in the same caliber as a
Division I school. Also a factor in my decision is that my best friend is attending there next year
so thats why I am considering this school.
What would be my top choice in school if it was not for cost and the large chance that I
will not be accepted is Duke University. I have been a Duke Basketball fan my whole life and it
would be amazing if I could be able to sit in the student section of one of the basketball games in
Cameron Indoor Stadium. Enrollment is only around 7,000 students but I wouldnt mind how
small it is because of how prestigious their business program is. (Duke) The marketing program
is ranked fifth best in the country but it is nearly impossible to get in to. Also it is about an eight
hour drive away from home and that is a long way, but I would make that trek if I got accepted
and I could afford it. The cost of just tuition for the school is around 45,000 dollars (Family
Connection) because it is a private school and it is very prestigious. The business connections
that are possible to make at the school are never ending.
In conclusion, James Madison seems like the best school for me. It is just the size and
distance from home that I wanted. It is also a great cost for a prestigious school. The football
athletic atmosphere is outstanding with great school pride. The only downside is that is that the
college is in a small city and is not near any cities where I can get a major business internship.
Even though I have decided that James Madison is my top school, it would be awesome if I
could attend Duke. Also Delaware is in a close second place. The only reason why I dont like it
is because it is more expensive than James Madison and is has a less prestigious business school.
The college search is a grueling process that I am glad is almost over.
Appendix A
Application
University of Delaware
Application Dates
January 15 - Application deadline for freshmen
Salisbury University
Essays
All standardized test results must be officially forwarded to Salisbury University from the
respective testing centers or your high school guidance office. The ETS code number for
Salisbury University is 5403 and the ACT code is 1716.
Salisbury University requires one letter of recommendation
Early Decision November 15
Early Action December 1
Regular Decision January 15
Application Forms
http://www.salisbury.edu/admissions/apply/
Duke University
Essays
Both the Common Application and the Universal College Application include a one-page
personal essay. In addition, both include short essay questions that are specific to Duke and that
offer you the opportunity to share your unique interests and perspective. One question is
required, and we also offer two optional prompts--and yes, they are truly optional! You can
submit your short writing with or after the other student portions of the application, no later than
the application deadline.
All candidates for admission must complete one of the following standardized testing options:
the test of the ACT, including the writing exam or the College Board SAT, plus two SAT Subject
Tests.
Application Dates
You must also apply either for Early Decision or Regular Decision, and we will process your
application according to the plan you check on the Common Application.
Appendix B
Interviews
I'd say apply for as many scholarships as possible so that money isn't as big of an issue when it
comes to finally deciding. Also make sure to look at a variety of colleges to get a feel for various
locations.
Is there anything else that helped you choose the college you will be attending in
the fall?
Chances for successes, where ever it might be you attend you wanna make sure you're in an
environment where you'll grow and learn. Also knowing you'll have some assistance or guidance
along the way, for me it was the fact that my already sister attended the school of my choice.
Yes, especially at football games. Also, there is a certain character associated with being a JMU
Duke. When anyone mentions being a Duke, it's associated with respect and hospitality and we
take a lot of pride in that.
What is the athletic atmosphere like at the college you are attending?
We are very proud and supportive of our teams even if they don't win that much. Football games
are big events where people tailgate beforehand and we throw purple and gold streamers
whenever we score a touchdown. Basketball games are also exciting depending on who we are
playing. Our women's team is phenomenal.
Did you receive any financial aid ?
No.
Are there many study abroad options at your college?
Yes! And I highly recommend you take a look at them. Every major has at least one or two
options to study abroad and receive credit and there are general education study abroad programs
too.
Do you recommend the college you are attending to future students?
Of course. JMU is the best place on earth. It has something for everyone.
Sources:
https://www.duke.edu/
"Duke Undergraduate Admissions." Duke Admissions. N.p., n.d. Web. 05 June 2015.
http://www.udel.edu/
"Discover." University of Delaware Undergraduate Admissions. N.p., n.d. Web. 05 June 2015.
http://www.jmu.edu/
"Academics." James Madison University. N.p., n.d. Web. 05 June 2015
http://www.salisbury.edu/
"SALISBURY UNIVERSITY." Salisbury University: Admissions. N.p., n.d. Web. 05 June 2015.
https://connection.naviance.com/family-connection/colleges/
"Welcome to Family Connection by Naviance." N.p., n.d. Web. 05 June 2015.