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30 Essays Why I Deserve to Win. ase; Canada


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Why I Deserve to Win Essay # 1
Meet new people, new Culture are so interesting that God give it to us. We can learn
how unique the
culture is created., How to respect their culture and enjoying all changes that God
gives to us.
Life is a book that should we fill each sheet with various activities useful every day.
Book can be read
people in order to give them knowledge, give benefit to them. God always give us
new sheet to fill.
What would we fill?
Peoples with long life journey have thick book, but not means older peoples have
more thick, because
its possible that young peoples that have various experience can add thickness of
their book even
thicker than older people.
Of course ,I want to be the young People.
My friend ever told to me if you have a chance to go abroad so go to Montreal,
Canada, because at
there you will find how unique the culture that American mixed with European
Culture. You will not find
this unique culture in the world except in Montreal.
Im so interest to follow Summer School Program. I want to realize my dream to
study in Concordia
University, Montreal, Canada because I know that a lot of people from difference
cultural around the
world are studying there. I can learn various culture that they brought and I would
share it to my
Country. Besides that, I can promote Indonesian Cultural and share with my friends
there that we have a
lot of traditions and the other unique traditions that can interesting them, like Batik
fashion that can you
see at my profile because I wear it.Indonesia have unique food such as Baso and
Sate that Mr. President
Obama has eated in Indonesia.
Indonesia has motto Bhineka Tunggal Ika , that means although difference but
we united . I have a
big ambition to share this philosophy to my friends there that difference should not
make us divorce but
it must motivate us to keep united and fill up one another to reach peace life. So
theres not cold war
and battle inter brotherhood again .Because I am sure that human plurality is the
basic of the Modern

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Civilization.
I am Tuti purwaningsih , fourth years student of Bogor Agricultural University. My
major is Statistics and
minor is Economics Development. Now I follow active as staff of profession
Association GAMMA SIGMA
BETA , department of Statistics , Mathematics and Science faculty. Here, I am as
divisions treasurer of
Database Center. Here, the Activity like updating all related or relevant data which
important for all
student of statistics especially and students of Bogor Agricultural University
generally. We always
coordinate with the other division that have relation with data to be neat in order to
be able used easily
and quickly. Im also have involved myself active in Senate and committee like
Leader of Fund and Effort
division in Statistika Ria, as Leader of consume division in event Workshop PKM, as
staff of Special
division in National Festival Science , etc.
Besides active in organization, I am also non-stopped to motivate myself in order to
non-stopped have
achievement in academics, thanks to God that some month ago I have given
opportunity to win :
1. National Masterpiece Creation of students Contest
2. Recycle Garbage contest at Gebyar of Student Care Environment in Agricultural
Bogor University
3. Masterpiece Write of research about "Bakso Daging Kelinci Dengan Penambahan
Tepung Kulit Pisang
sebagai Biofortifikasi Mineral (Meat Ball of Flesh of Hare With Addition Flour of
Husk of Banana as
Saltpetre Biofortification ") which finally fund by Direktorat Pendidikan Tinggi
Indonesia
I am also happy follow training and seminar for improve my knowledge like Training
of
Entrepreneuurship workshop, ESQ Leadership Training, Writing of Proposal and
scientific Report ,
Workshop And Seminar PKM, National Scientific Seminar, Seminar of Islam Science,
National
Competition of Statistika Ria , Welcome Ceremony Statistics, Statistics National
Seminar, Printing
Champion of Muri Rampak Traditional Refine of Sunda(one of many Cultral West
Java, Indonesia).

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I like public speaking, I am lecture assistant in Study of Statistics Methods and


taught about 165 students
from two major, Bio Chemical Departements and Computer science Departements.
Beside it, I spend my
spare time to work in Statistics Centre, Bogor, West Java ,Indonesia.
I feel,I need a lot of guidance yet, to be someone who has a Leadership Soul, in
order to manage and
understand what peoples around me need. I hope can make my environment to be
better. I want to
combine my Education with pleasure by learning something that matters to me.
Hopefully I can follow Summer School Contest
I request the support and your pray because I cant without your support
So, please Vote me guys!
Warm Regards,
Tuti Purwaningsih

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Why I Deserve to Win Essay # 2


"Everyone deserves to win, but the best one deserves to win at most . Losing is
certainty, but winning is
a possibility. It's called win-win solution!", said my father.
In such globalization era where education and technology have dynamically
changed and given many
global impacts to the world, I think as a good nation (especially from developing
country) who conducts
as a student, this becomes the opportunity to learn and share with another people
from many countries
around the world, particularly the developed ones in order to know how they
(developed nations) can
sustain and take a part in controlling the world and mostly to know how their
cultures really are.
Why I am eligible:
1. I believe there's a certain spiritual power that controls us in this world, that is
God. The reason why
God creates human is, God wants to know how well he/she uses his/her mind and
heart which have
been blessed by God in order to admit that everything belongs to him. That's the
way how a winner
thinks, and I do so.
2. Because I'm born as the champion. See, yes indeed my father is the first best
father of the world, and
my mother is exactly the first best mother of the world. When they considered to
make a baby, you
know my father's sperm (which is composed by millions substances of sperm) had
to contest themselves
to reach the only one special ovum of my mother to be a zygote and grew to be
baby which was
acknowledged as BEST OF THE BEST. You know, the baby is ME!
3. I don't need to know why they (another nations) are totally different with my one,
but I really need to
know what makes my nation is totally different with them because at the end of the
day that's the way a
good nation contributes to his country through his mind and tell the world that
we're different. I bet the
committee will only choose a good nation and I think I'm on progress to be it.
4. Another quotes my father told me, "Don't die before you give a meaning!" At
least there's a certain
part who really expects me to win this and I want to give them that meaning. The
meaning isn't only
about the pride but it is how you bring the positive changes. The one who puts that
expectation is
absolutely my country itself because it knows that I'm (as a part of society) an
asset. So, what should be
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5. I know nobody could make the same reasons why they deserve to win, and
nobody could make the
same thoughts of mine. That's why I'm different. And a different is the one who
should win! :)
I do not know how, about I always dream for someday I can go to USA, Canada,
Japan, England, French,
Germany, and so forth because I do love making friends, especially from other
countries. So far, Ive got
two opportunities lost for going abroad in term of student exchanges. When I was in
first grade of senior
high school, I knew for some information about student exchange program to USA,
called AFS (American
Field Service), but unfortunately my parents didnt permit me to join such contest.
The reason merely
coming from them was because I needed to waste one year for study as a
compliance of joining AFS,
thus I would finish my high school for about four years. I lost the first chance. Then,
when I was second
grader, again I got information about JENESYS, one of student exchange program to
Japan. I joined the
contest under the permission of my parents. But at that time, I just got the 3rd
position while they
would only send two students. That was making me so disappointed. Well, by this
contest, I think I have
one more chance to reach my dream for going abroad.
Thank you!
Let's be friend, here!
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Why I Deserve to WinEssay # 3


Hey, Guys..!!
My name's Angga Febri, from Indonesia.
This is one of my dream to get scholarship in abroad. I have a big passion to
learning in the other
country but i don't have enough money to make my dream comes true. So
scholarship is the solution to
get them all.
I deserve to win the scholarship summer school in Montreal, Canada because:
1. I am proud to be an Indonesian and I want to share the culture and values to the
world.
2. I love to meet new faces from different walks of life and from different places
around the world.
3. I like to explore the world and get a good and educative experience.
A little something about me, I am 19 years old and a student of Indonesian
Literature from the
Padjadjaran University, Bandung -West Java. I love everything about writing
activities.
As a student of Indonesian Literature, of course I struggled with many issues
surrounding the language,
writing, art, literature, folklore, and culture.
With the ability I have, namely language and literature, I wish I could give a real
contribution to my
beloved homeland. I would like to introduce my country, Nusantara, to the world
through writing.
I think, writing is one of the most effective media to propagate something, including
everything about
my country.
Im sure I can give maximum contibution and I believe that my partisipation in
Concordia Universitys
International Summer School program will be useful for me, my country as well and
also for the activity
itself.
Finally, hopefully with my election as one of the International Summer School
Student Contest, I can
bring my country to be a better and dignified Indonesia. And obtain the goodness
and blessings of God.
Through the Lord, I know He has good plans lined up for me.
Amen.

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Thank you so much for you who have voted me. Also for you who have not, vote me
soon.
Canada ...
Wait for me there!
I'm coming ...!
Monday, March 07, 2011
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Why I Deserve to WinEssay # 4


Its every young citizen's responsibility today to ensure that they give something
back to the society that
they have been taking everything from. Pakistan as a society and as a State has
given me a lot, it has
given me Faith, Discipline, Strength, Education and the Confidence to go to any part
of the world and
represent Pakistan with Dignity and thus I believe there is no better chance than
this one to go to a
Developed country like Canada and represent Pakistan at a massive forum and help
people know about
the aspects of Pakistan as a State which not much people really know. And also the
prospect of getting
to know people of my age from different cultures, knowing what they think about
the world and how
they see the current Socio Economic conditions shaping up in the future is probably
the most interesting
and mouth watering prospect which I am really looking forward to.
Monday, March 07, 2011
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Why I Deserve to Win Essay # 5


Hi, hola, halo, hello, hallo, hej, bonjour, ni hao, ciao, konnichiwa, annyeonghaseyo,
selam...
What makes me deserve to win?
I have some things that make me deserve to win but the main reason is I am a hard
willing girl who will
do everything in positive ways to reach a victory. I love to win. The other reasons
are I am open minded
and very interested in meeting new people who has a totally different background
with me. I love
cultures. It will be a very exciting challenge to interact with them and do cultural
exchange. I also need
cultural exchange since I am learning nursing. Nurse needs cultural approaching
skill to give a holistic
care for patients so this chance will helps me to get that skill, moreover i have a
willing to work abroad.
Study abroad is always my dream since i was in junior high school. This summer
school would be a very
great chance for me to receive that dream. I also think that Montreal is an unique
city where people use
French in the middle of country that has English as its first language and also a
diversity of many
cultures. Spending summer studying everything i could learn there at Concordia
University would be so
fun and full of new experiences.
WHERE THERE IS A WILL, THERE ARE SO MANY WAYS.
Elda
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Why I Deserve to WinEssay # 6


hi everyone, I'm muna from Aceh, one of famous region in indonesia. Why i deserve
to win? it's because
I love going abroad, having new experience, new friend, and new culture.
Aceh, as you know was distroyed by the great wave (Tsunami) and earthquake. so
many foreigners came
to help us. Cultures and languages were exchanging around us. That's why I was so
obsessed to spread
our cultures and languages even further through the whole world.
Let me tell you one of my experience, I went to United States on 2008 as an
exchange student, I got new
families, friends, self abilities, and knowledges. Too many unforgetable memories of
the whole year
living there. It was like building new bridge between us, Indonesia and United
States. I was addicted to
it. So I went to China on 2010 to get more experiences. I speak four languages and
have been learning
French. Thanks for God, adaptation is not my problem anymore.
I am so obsessed to win the contest, because I really love to visit places in world,
open my mind wider,
learn so many new things, improve my foreign language ability, knowledge,
experience, and build next
bridge. I just love doing it.
I will be really happy if I can win the contest and really appriciate the votes. Thank
you so much
everyone!
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Why I Deserve to Win Essay # 7


"Why I Feel I Need/Deserve This Scholarship" My family is considered large by
today's standards. Being
the oldest of four brothers, I have had to mature quickly and learned at a young age
what responsibility
means.Besides that,I feel I deserve this scholarship because I have overcome many
obstacles in my life
to come out on top. The activities that I have been involved with have helped me
grow as a person and
have allowed me to reach out a helping hand to the community.
I feel I deserve this scholarship because I have high motivation considering the
challenges ahead is much
tougher to get into the world of work and develop business and consider the role of
communication in
the life of the world of work then I intend to improve the knowledge I had
understood better and
deepen their knowledge of communication, especially in the English language. I
really appreciate to all
parties, especially the organizers if I supported and given the opportunity to
participate in this golden
opportunity.
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Why I Deserve to Win Essay # 8


Visiting Canada is my dream vacation which has a potential of coming true by
winning summer school
scholarship at Concordia University. This will be a great chance for me to learn
intensive English. In
addition to that, I will be able to learn fundamentals of Human Resources Practices.
These two courses
will be a great help for future endeavors.
I am very out going and fun loving individual. I have been hearing about living in
multicultural
environment from my sister living in Ottawa. After entering this contest, I am
excited to experience it. I
would like to explore different cultures and introduce mine to them. This scholarship
will give me a great
chance to study and explore.
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Why I Deserve to WinEssay # 9


I Want deserve to win a Summer School Scholarship at Concordia University
because I feel has more
potential that I can give to other friends.
To be elected me in the Summer School Scholarship at the University otonashi
Concordia also enrich my
knowledge about other countries besides Indonesia alone.
I currently lecture in the faculty of psychology University of Malang and here I learn
about human
Characteristics. if I am allowed to participate in this scholarship I can apply the
knowledge I have gained
with direct knowledge of human characteristics that are human first Canadian city.
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Why I Deserve to WinEssay #10


i deserve to win because i am someone who is willing to try new ways and methods
of learning
something new. Travelling and learning something new especially in another country
has always been
encouraging and exciting.
This is an opportunity that i was eagerly waiting for. Just learning is not my goal but
imparting that
knowledge to others is something that i consider worthy of doing. Canada is a place
where there are
people of different cultures and observing thoses cultures and traditional practices
is marvelous.
Studying in canada would give me an opportunity to enhace my academic and
social capabilities and by
taking the courses that i have opted for will further increase my knowledge that i
would gladly part on
for the betterment of society
i have done two courses in french and this program would help me to learn it even
better.Making new
friends and meeting people from across the globe would help us share ideas and
see things from a new
light and perspective
By voting for me you will increase my chances of achieving my goals and that would
help me avail this
opportunity
Your vote means a lot... keep voting and keep smiling
Zehra :)
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Why I Deserve to Win Essay # 11


I deserve to win this contest because i would like to become friends with people
from all over the world.
And, I think it would be great if that people around the world could care for others,
learning their
languages, cultures, histories, gestures, and so on. I hope that together, we can
discover that there is
meaning to our precious life.
I want to make you aware of this. Knowledge is power. I've learned in a particular
case that the more I
know, I am more ready to make a point. Making a point that has the power to
change people's minds.
Knowing you have the knowledge about the crisis, you can find that has not found
the strength and
motivation from within, including the motivation to teach others.
We have the power of youth and fresh ideas. We have freedom and voice. We can
form friendships and
bonds of unity. Lets exercise these skills.
One more thing that makes me deserve to win this contest is i want to encourage
people to make
changes. Its the little things that matter most. Try to help those in need. Dont
encourage violence.
Support the people that fight for you everyday. Recycle instead of littering. Make
changes in our life and
educate others to do the same. We are stronger as a whole, and we can be most
successful together.
I am ready. I get excited. My new adventure is ahead. My dreams begin to take
shape. Eleanor Roosevelt
once said, The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams.
So I learn to believe,
because of my power not only to change myself for the better but by doing so,
change those around me.
I know i can make an impact. Theres no doubt in my mind.
Those are my greatest reason.
And now, the greatest thing you can do is vote by click the 'LIKE' button for me.
You will not do incredible things without an incredible dream. John Eliot.
This is my incredible dream to Summer in Montreal, Canada.
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Why I Deserve to Win Essay # 12


I deserve to win because I've passion & energy and I'm a responsible & analytical
guy. The courses that
I've selected Provides introductory overview of Business, Human resource &
Marketing Skills. I've a
Bachelor's Degree in Business Administration & i want to further broaden my
Knowledge & Skills in that
particular field. I have Charisma & Passion to study in this specific Field. Moreover, I
certainly believe
that joining Summer School will assist me to achieve my career goal as an
entrepreneur of my own
successful company in future...
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Why I Deserve to WinEssay # 13


I think I'm someone who loves experimentation and unorthodoxy. I don't follow
stream and I like to
think out of the box, which is why such an opportunity will be colossal landmark for
me. I have a
penchant for travelling and film-making: two ingredients that will most possibly
unlock the secret recipe
that is me! However, for me, it doesn't stop at learning. I don't consider myself as
an end to anything. I
believe in transferring the knowledge that I have so that the legacy is carried on
forward.
I have a firm resolve and I am extremely persistent at accomplishing tasks. I have
always been inspired
by Canadian culture. I have a friend who studies there and I'm simply marveled by
the experiences he
had to tell. The kind of exposure, the amount of acceptance and the eclecticity of
ethnicities furnishes
the ideal comfort zone for a foreign student and I believe that really helps with the
learning process.
I have also had the pleasure of conceptualizing and co-scripting an independent
feature film with my
colleague which will hopefully start filming in the summer of 2011 and this
opportunity will contribute
immensely to that project as well.
At the end of the day, what you are doesn't matter. All those layers vanish within
time and space. But
what you do, leaves behind an indelible mark, for generations to come.
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Why I Deserve to Win Essay # 14


As being a small-town college of engineering student in Morocco, I would really love
to know what it's
like to be abroad, specially in Montreal, Canada.
I believe I deserve to win because I'm an open-minded, receptive and serious
student.New cultures,
different people and several places to visit are to me a social challenge, and I'm
very excited about that.
I am fond of cinema, and getting an opportunity to know more about film making,
for instance, is to be
taken seriousely.I am eager to discover interesting things about it, which is why I'm
applying for this.
Also, getting to study following the canadian system is a main advantage, it is
believed to be one of the
most effective educational system worldwide.
Finally, being a part of this experience will really be a push for me to strenghten my
knowledge and
learn new things.Also, it will help me to get better in a personal way.
That's all, I hope this will help you to make your mind about whether I deserve to
win or not.
Sincerely,
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Why I Deserve to Win Essay # 15


I deserve to win the summer school scholarship in Montreal, Canada because:
> I love to travelling and explore new "world" for education
> I love to meet new people and gathered
> I love being busy. I can walk and talk everyday, share my experience and listen to
other people
experience
> I love photography and i want to capturing new place, new people, new
environment.
> Im totally 100% Indonesian and Im proud of it. I want people knows about
Indonesia. Knows the exotic
island, delicious food, and the charm-kind-warm people.
>I have lots experience in a big Event. I was handle two big event from TV station,
such as tvOne and
Trans TV, and now, im a news presenter for Campus TV
Now, im in 3rd year in Department Of Communication, concentrated for Journalisme
and i love
everything about Communication.
I'm ready for everything would comes to me. I know God have big plans for me and i
hope this contest is
the one of its.
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Why I Deserve to Win Essay # 16


Just call me Zainal. I'm from Selayar, South Sulawesi, Indonesia. Now, I'm taking my
Degree by majoring
of International Business Course at Universiti Kebangsaan Malaysia, Kuala Lumpur,
West Malaysia.
Well, we know that everyone has a right to win. Even before our birth in the real
world, we actually
already a champion by defeating 300 million sperms to reach our mother's womb.
Proverb says; we are
born to be a winner. I believe it for sure because that's our right.
Since I was in Junior High School I have a dream that one day I will go to abroad
especially North
America, Canada. I believe Concordia University provides this occasion. I'm sure this
is one of the way to
actualize my dream. The way where I can increase and extend my knowledge. The
way I can Learn more
about cultures with different people and different backgrounds. The way I can get
the key of success and
open the gate of my success. That's why I deserve to win.
I really hope to meet students from more than 150 different countries, dealing with
them, sharing
experiences, exchanging ideas, speaking/discussing about the world today and of
course, broadening my
networking contact to whole the globe. It's a rare opportunity for me. Thus, willy
nilly, I have to utilize
this chance as well as possible. I won't waste it. It's so interesting and indeed, I'm
very interested in it.
That's why I deserve to win.
Moreover, my majoring is an International Business Course which is related with
mostly subjects are
offered by this scholarship. This is extremely helpful to study more about new things
in campus life and
to improve further my business skill for a bright future. So, I do expect to involve in
this program. It will
be a pride for myself, my parents and my nation if I succeed in this Contest. That's
why I deserve to win.
I promise to myself that what I gain in this "golden event" I will contribute to the
others, particularly my
beloved country, Indonesia.
My success is in you, buddies!
So guys, please helping me to come true my dream.
Thank You
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Why I Deserve to Win Essay # 17


I feel I deserve this scholarship because I including my parents have seen many
obstacles in the life.
I wanted to represent my country Pakistan worldwide in a positive manner and to
change its image in
the foreigners eye.
Our religion Islam is the best religion and I wanted to spread its teachings worldwide
as well.
Regarding education, since childhood it was my dream to study abroad. That was
the main reason why I
registered here. Another reason including my parents dream and I wanted that
dream to come true..
Taking this scholarship as a challenge, it will give me a great experience which will
be undoubtedly a
great way to success.
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Why I Deserve to Win Essay # 18


I want to improve my marketing and public relation skills, because I feel can
improve my personality by
not only studying IT related courses but also studying subjects of other fields in
which I can perform
well. Besides this also want to test my potential in extracurricular activities as well. I
hope my friends will
vote me to get admission there.
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Why I Deserve to WinEssay # 19


I am 19 years old girl named Zahra Fadhila. Simply call me Zara. I am college
student at one of the best
universities in Indonesia, University of Indonesia. I am the next biostatistician here.
In order to create a
great biostatiscian, please 'like' me to help me cope my dream :)
Continuing study abroad (freely) is one of my biggest education-dream ever. By
joining this summer
school, it will probably be the very first step to reach my dream because it will be a
'plus' score for me.
This is a challenge which i want to change into opportunity.
Why I deserve to win is because i really like to make some new experiences, new
knowledge, new
atmosphere, and last but not least, new friends.
Joining summer school like this is the newest thing for me since I have never been
going abroad. I
extremely believe that I can learn something that is so far more different with my
field of study at
university. Not only knowledge, but I also will get many experiences because I'm the
one who believes
that experience is the best teacher in life. I'm quite sure that Montreal will help me
get a better future
for myself, my family, and my nation. Besides, I also take an interest in learning
French. Since Canada is
one of the official English-and-French-speaking country, I believe that Montreal is
the right place for me
to improve my English and learn French.
Furthermore, if I win this contest, i do not have to pay anything for it, so that my
family's finance will be
just fine since my daddy's passed away months ago :)
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Why I Deserve to Win Essay # 20


I deserve to win because I think that by being a part of the Summer School
Scholarship program I will get
the training to realize my goals and it will give me the spirit to take successful steps
towards my goals.
This scholarship will give me an edge over other individuals who are unable to study
in such prestigious
universities. My victory in this competition will be my first step towards the journey
that I will encounter
later on in life. I have always had the willingness to work for the welfare of the
society and promote
international brotherhood. I participated in the Intel Science Fairs with a project
aimed for exactly this
purpose. I made black ink from the pomegranate waste and displayed the
procedure of making it in all
the science fairs I competed in (District, National and International). The procedure
is relatively simple
and can be done by the poor to make ink and sell it to generate income especially
for the rural women
in my country, in doing so this procedure can be a step to eradicate the menace of
poverty. I won
National grand award in Pakistan for this project. I think of many such projects on a
daily basis but sadly
in my country there aren't sufficient facilities to work on all of those projects.
Globalization has changed
the world and interaction with other counterparts has become inevitable. This
Summer School will
provide an opportunity to interact with youth and get to know each others point of
view on different
issues. I believe that interaction among people is the only instrument to bring peace
in the world.
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Why I Deserve to Win Essay # 21


-one of my dreams is going somewhere and doing something that i never imagine
before, meeting
stranger, taste local food, explore the culture, take a walk around in the city, take
photograph of many
places. And i think this program will give me those opportunities PLUS in this
program i can LEARN new
knowled at a great university , blending with another students in there, gain so
many exciting
experience
-i come from indonesia, which is so different from canada geographically and also
culturally, because of
that i can share my culture and behaviour with another students who comes from
different country. and
it always so exciting to know another person who lives in another side of this world.
-i always hear or see 'canada' in the movies or books, i want to experience the
country for real,
becoming a part of one of the most lively country in the world, although just at a
summer time.
(montreal's summer temperature same as indonesia's winter temperature. i can't
imagine how cold
montreal in a winter)
-my communication skill is good
-i will become a good student.
-become a great friend
-become an awesome learner
-and if i can join the program, i will never let you dissapointed by picking me!
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Why I Deserve to Win Essay # 22


I want to win this contest because it will be very happy for me when to visit,
especially montreal canada.
I was a primary school teacher candidates in my residence. I hope to get a lot of
good experience from
my country or outside my country. will be many things that I can get if I win this
contest. valuable
experience that I will share with my friends and my students later. I am interested in
providing a great
appreciation of cultures, languages, traditions and uniqueness of Canada, especially
montreal. I also do
not mind getting to know more friends from various places.
And the most valuable is if I can tell my experience to my students who are in
isolated places in the
province where I live, so they too can feel such an interesting experience. thanks.
yours respectfully
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Why I Deserve to Win Essay # 23


I'm a person who likes challenges that never I fell or I do before and I would never
stop doing all my
best,to achieve what I want..
to study abroad I think I can't, because I wasn't enough money, because both my
parents die. My father
died six years ago and my mother died four years ago.
now I'm studying at the University of Diponegoro, Faculty of social science and
politics by using money
from the government of Indonesia or known as scholarship.
I am very pleased to be a participant in this program.
I hope in this program I can explore all that I like about the business and social
issues has always be my
priority. I have two reasons to explain why I like social and business. first social we
can provide or share
with someone else who needs help and also we can know about the condition of
someone who needs
help. The second is from the business, the busines we can get the money to give
and share with other
people using our social nature we have.
I want to help and share with others who require great attention and focus to those
who need help. I
hope in this contest I could meet more people who have a very high social sense.
I hope I can be the winner of this program and I could realize my dream to help and
share with others.
To realize my dream and make it happen is me explain, I hope my friends and
everyone can help me to
choose and support me.
I'll do my best and with social science that I learned, I promised to bring the world a
better social..
thank you....
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Why I Deserve to WinEssay # 24


I feel I deserve this scholarship because I have overcome many obstacles in my life
to come out on top.
The activities that I have been involved with have helped me grow as a person and
have allowed me to
reach out a helping hand to the community. The activities that I have been involved
with include, among
others, my community,my family & my friends.
Ever since I was a child my family instilled in me the important of religion and a
good education.
Although my parents were not particularly wealthy they scarified themselves
financially hoping for me
to attain a strong education that will help me achieve significant reforms that in turn
will let me help
others.
I have proven that I am a good worker by putting my effort into everything I do and
excel in my everyday
life. In order to be a good worker you must not let opportunities slip by.
Opportunities can open doors
and a good worker that is impressive; eloquent often serves as the key to this door. I
myself must key on
the qualities like determination, focus, courage, and potential. I as a good worker
deserve and will thrive
upon the chance to succeed.
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Why I Deserve to WinEssay # 25


Why not?
I have experience of living in many different countries before. Which means that I've
been through
learning so many diversities of culture in my lifetime. Thus to adapt in other country
its not my problem
at all, I enjoy it instead.
I have skills in art, music, sports, language and martial arts. I like to draw sketches
and sometimes do
some paintings. Photography is another part of my life. I start to love this hobby
since I was in junior
high school using some old digital camera. At that time i used to save my money to
buy a super-cool
camera, which I have it now .
I love music; guitar and piano is my specialty. When I was in elementary school, I
took piano course.
Been learning for almost three years. Many people says I am a fast-learner, I doubt
that though. Well,
somehow I learn how to play guitar by myself on internet. Kinda cool isn't it? :p
I like to play soccer and tennis. I speak Indonesian, English, Spanish and little
Swedish. This year I am
going to take French in my studies. If I win this, i will have the opportunity to learn
French in practice.
i like to make friends. i like to hang out. I like to be social. I do part-time job to
survive. I have academic
and non-academic skills. I can cook. I can survive the jet-lag. I can clean my room. I
can wash dishes. I
can share my culture(I am Indonesian!) then I can spread your culture. I love
Montreal!
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Why I Deserve to Win Essay # 26


Friends, do you know the power of dreams?
Yes, a few people who aware of the power dream which could realize them dreams.
At some point, the
dream will be achieved. But I believe that my dream will come true someday.
Friends, I am a person who always dream to be able to go to the foreign. I try to
prove my dream by
trying to sign up at Taruna Nusantara's high school, 6 years ago. I thought, if i went
to the best school, i
had more opportunities. But, I must be patient because I did not pass the medical
test. Though I have
fulfilled the academic test.
3 years latter, since the rejection of Taruna Nusantara's high school without school I
always dreamed
there I should be able to go to foreign. Canada is a country of dreams.
ITB is the dream campus that I thought could help me to go to the foreign. But, I
must again be patient
as 2 times the entrance test does not pass my ITB.
My friends, my mind is very narrow with the thought that with the school in good
schools that can help
to go abroad that is foreign. But since I was attending college I started an open
mind with no school in
my favorite school could go overseas. True friends, the power of dreams can help us
to realize our
dreams. We just need to believe. Confident with our dreams.
I dreamed that I can go to foreign. And hopefully this contest International summer
school.
Please vote me, Friends....
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Why I Deserve to Win Essay # 27


Hello!
I'm a kind of person who passionate to learn different language and to know
different culture, that's
why now I'm studying at faculty of cultural science and take my major in Russian
Studies.
I really want to study aboard, but I never feel that experience. That's why i enter
this contest and i hope
I would be chosen for the summer course. For win this chance i need your vote. ^^
I exited to meet people from other country because I can know different culture, we
can exchange the
language, and maybe we can be good friends. I adapt to new place fast and i can
work in team.
I think Canada is one of best country when i can study, and Montreal is perfect
place, because i see this
city is kinda multicultural city.
So, guys, please help me to make my dream come true by vote me. ^^
Thank you. Terima kasih. Danke. Dank u. Gracias. Abrigada. Merci. Hvala. .
.
Regards. Yulia. ^^
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Why I Deserve to WinEssay # 28


Halo, my name is Yosef. (If you noticed, Halo is Indonesian word for Hello).
I recently study at Universitas Indonesia majoring in Accounting.
It is such a wonderful opportunity that Concordia University offers a full-paid
scholarship to its
international summer school program. Well, I take the risk to join this contest.
Because i know the
benefit from joining this program would better myself in any aspects, especially in
my english
conversation skills and perspective to see how the world evolves outside my
country, Indonesia.
I deserve to win because (well I don't like this part...) I excel in what I do. I love to
live in any cultural
differences. Moreover, It's my dream to study in other countries, and Canada is one
of options. As a city,
Montreal is influenced by French-English Culture, which I have been familiar with
from some movies I
have watched and music I listen to in my living activites. Hence, I would absolutely
enjoy the moment
living in Montreal.
My motto is one of Einstein's quote :
" Try not to become a man of success, but rather become a man of value"
I hope I could accomplish my vision in my lifetime. And I think, it becomes so much
closer to reach this
vision, when i learn valuable things in diversity which i will get, through this
program.
By any chance, if you think I deserve to win and join this program, you can press the
"like" button in the
up-right corner of my profile.
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Why I Deserve to WinEssay # 29


I strongly believe that Canada is a country that offers great opportunities to people
who have passion,
ambition and strong desire to make their dreams come true. I assume Im one of
those people who have
these qualities.
I come basically from a multi-cultural milieu where various languages are spoken:
Arabic, Tmazight,
French, and even English nowadays in the digital media at least. The diversity of
Moroccan materializes
as melting pot of cultures whereby Muslims, Jews, and Christians have lived in
harmony from time
immemorial. Such diverse cultural background will make it easy for me to deal with
the culturally
diverse setting of the summer school.
As a Master student in Cultural Studies, discovering various cultures, norms, and
ways of life have
always fascinated me. I have thereby got to explore and understand cultural
diversity and difference.
Undoubtedly, such awareness would make us so much appreciate our sense of
identity and the
importance of others in our lives.
I do believe that I deserve to win because I have the ability to positively impact
peoples minds. Im an
open-minded and influential person in my surroundings. I believe I can make
effective change in my life
and in the life of others. Besides,as a member and responsible in the MAFE (The
Moroccan Association
of Friends of English), social work helps me get adapted to different situations, be
progressive and active
in my own community. This program would be a good venue for me to extend the
pooling of my
knowledge and exchange experiences.
If you think my qualities enable me to be a part of this summer school program,
please vote for me.
Thanks beforehand.
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Why I Deserve to Win Essay # 30


I dreamed of doing something big. I dreamed of making a difference. I dreamed of
inspiring my fellow
youth through pushing and doing my best to attain it by finishing my study. After
making those dreams
in reality, I realized that life will never stop there ... it will continue to create new
dreams.
I graduated with the Degree of Bachelor of Arts in Political Science. We studied
different theories and
political practices including political systems and factors affecting it continuous
change. One of its
objective is to mold us to be a more responsible and worthy citizen of our country
-Philippines. I want to
be a more productive citizen and I believe that Concordia Universitys International
Summer School can
help and make me to be one. Currently, I am a Law Student of Aquinas University.
From 2008-2009, I attended conferences abroad to widen my views and ideas. I
started to be a Student
Ambassador to Japan, Philippine Representative to Indonesia, and Youth
Representative in Malaysia. It
really help me to be nationally conscious and aware of what's going on today.
There are many reason why i want to be part of this programme. Concordia
Universitys International
Summer School will surely help me gain new ideas and experiences which i can
share with my fellow
Filipino. It can be a training ground for me to be more fit in facing the challenges of
life in the future.
This programme will strengthen the foreign relationship between Philippines and
Canada and it'll be an
honor for me to be a contributory factor in maintaining the close tie. This
Programme may also help in
merging two culture and views for a greater development. I want my dreams to be
in reality and i want
Concordia Universitys International Summer School Programme to be part of my
success.
I deserve to win because i am a hardworking, optimistic and a person with a goal
(who is determined to
achieve it). I believe that i could be a great help to lessen the current problems of
our country and I will
start to make it real by joining and be one of recipient of this programme. I'll do
whatever it takes to be
part of Concordia Universitys International Summer School.
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