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Audience Feedback - Google Forms

Noreen Abdallah

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Summary
1. Did you like the first edit of our music video?
Yes

69%

No

23%

2. After seeing edit 1, how do you think it could be improved?

i needs some clips of the artist rapping so it could look better. there are too many
shots of the girl. yo need to make the storyline understandable. its quite confusing
Include a wider and varied range of shots, also maybe include shots of her from her
past of bad times e.g. being in a children's home
I don't think that the sped up shots of the protagonist on the bench works well. Zoom
in shot of Holloway prison sign should be re-shot.
Narrative could be clearer , shots too repetitive
more clips variety of shots
When the missing shot are added I think the continuity of the video would be better.
I think that to improve you could have added more shots of her taking drugs and
maybe you could have showed how her life has been corrupted to tell the audience
that drugs and smoking has ruined her life.
more clips, the artist rapping more variety shots
All extra shots should be added in to fill the empty spaces. The narrative needs to be
improved and much clearer.
there needs to be more narrative. i think it needs to be more emotive if possible
otherwise its good
Add all shots needed into edit to make the narrative clearer, also, the shots tend to
drag on.
i believe that you should include a wider variety of shots,that will help with the
narrative,additionally shortern any long edits that seem to drag

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3. Are the digipak and advert clearly linked?

Yes

11

85%

No

15%

4. If 'yes', what aspects show that they link?

You have the shot of the artist as the front cover and the other ancillary so shows a
clear connection.
the images remind me of the music video and the ad has the same image as the
digipak which is also another clear link.
Pictures of the locations where the video took place was included which showed good
relevance
Same picture used, similar colourings and the same type font is used.
the picture
they link very well. i liked it
the black and white theme the font colour
The same colour scheme , same model, includes artist name
The front cover photo for the digipak has also been used for the advert and the
typography is the same.
the colours show that they belong together also the use of the writing and the man
that is in both the music video and the billboard.
they have the same feature (black and white)
the colour scheme and font are similar and relate to one another
the link from the video and the narrative link with the album cover etc

5. If 'no' what aspects are needed in order for them to link?

because the font is deferent and also the blue colour is unfitting it shouldn't be blue
.
they need to be in the same font

6. Did you like the first digipak draft?

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Yes

11

85%

No

15%

7. How could it be improved?

Shots looks generic and doesn't link to the genre of the album, shot could use some
variety
.
Maybe all digipak images could be in either black or white or colour.
maybe a Bit of colour or even more writing that isn't so bold
you need spinal label the CD cover
A variety of shots is needed around the park other than the park bench
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the look the same
The pictures used in the digipak are similar or the same to ones seen in the music
video, it would be better to take use other shots in slightly different settings
just a more clear shot of the artist
The images look to stretched and I don't feel like they go together very well
maybe take some picture of the city empty streets

8. Did you like the first advert/billboard draft?

Yes

11

85%

No

8%

9. How could it be improved?

it was the same picture as the album cover and doesn't offer variety, not eye catching
include some of the songs featured in the abum
by having other versions otherwise i like the font and the actual advert itself.
maybe
the blue font needs to change it doesnt fit

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Though I like the ep advert, it could be different from the picture already used in the
digipak
the blue does not link to the rest of the advert
It doesn't
Have the same font colour for the advert and digipak.
The font should be the same as that on the digipak or the other way around. More
drafts should be made to be able to compare them.
the font needs to be the same for both the advert and digipak
maybe include your digipak of the album in it or explain a bit more about the genre.
n\a

10. What genre do you think the music video fits into?

Pop

0%

Indie

0%

R&B

8%

Country

0%

Disco

0%

Folk

0%

Rap/Grime

11

85%

Alternative

0%

Urban

8%

11. How can we make our products fit closer to our genre?
Include shots of the urban city add colour use different settings of the city
Lip syncing parts added to fit to the grime genre
.
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Compare other rap/grime digipaks to your own, then use the conventions of that
genre more.
more shots, clearer narrative (its confusing)
i don't know i'm not really famlair with the genre enough
you need more variety shots
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maybe include more teenagers or hooded youth .

rap
Include the artist in the video (add in the missing shots).
Shots of the artist when you get them
you need to look closer to the lyrics and correspond them to the footage, you should
add the artist to the video. lip syncing

12. What are the strengths of our products?

The link between them is visible but can be improved. The shots are of good quality.
Music video includes really good shots and the acting went well with it The font of the
Digipak suits the genre Billboard includes reviews and the date of the album
the strengths of your products would be that it is very clear and detailed as i gives the
message to the audience very clearly. also it hooks the audience in and makes them
feel sorry for the girl.
you generally have a nice narrative and the ancillary products fit nicely with the music
video
the black and white is a good choice links to the genre very well. the narrative of the
music video
fantastic choice of digipak pictures and advert
you can feel the emotion and relate it to the lyrics although narrative can be
improved.
Narrative is clear in video digipak and ep are clear
clear idea of genre
the font the colours the mystery behind the photos
some scenes of the music video and the billboard
very good ideas nice sort line (just needs to be clearer
There is a clear narrative within your music video.

13. What are the weaknesses of our products?

Think more about the conventions of your music genre.
Should include more when you have the footage
the narrative could be clearer
.
Improve link between these three things. Add in missing shots. Have a vary of shots
so they are not all similar and stay engaging.
a lot of content missing and shots are to long although can be affective can be over
used.
Work on making the narrative clearer
need more version more photos both of artist and other things that link to the
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album/EP
Music video could have a clearer narrative Digipak could use more of a variety of
shots Use a different picture for the billboard but in the same colour scheme
the fonts, too much narrative (add lip syncing)
needs a clearer narrative some shots of the artist rapping
music video
change the font of the advert

14. Overall how would you rate our products?

0

0%

0%

0%

0%

8%

15%

46%

23%

8%

0%

10

0%

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