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ESSAY 4: FAMILY
My name is Fifi. I am a beautiful girl. Many people say I am very beautiful. I am 17 years
old. I am a form five student. I am in 5 Mesra class. Many boys in my school like me but
I do not like them. I like one boy in 5 Maju. He is not handsome but he is very rich. [62
words]
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Last week, Kee helped Husin, Bablu and Hani. He gave them RM300.00. He helped
them to buy books. He bought Science, Mathematics and English books for them. Kee
bought twenty books. Husin, Bablu and Hani were very happy. [38 words]
To me, Kee is a very good leader. I respect Kee. I know many students also respect
Kee. [18 words]
[TOTAL: 228 WORDS]
ESSAY 6: SHOPPING
My name is Joe. I am 15 years old. I study at SMK Jaya. My school is very big. It is also
very famous. My school is one of the best schools in my district. I am in Form 3. I am
very handsome. I am more handsome than Justin Bieber. Many girls like me but I only
like one girl. She is my class monitor, Selena binti Gommeng. [69 words]
I have a happy family. My father is a doctor. He is a good doctor. His name is Majid
Rock. He is also handsome. My mother is a teacher. She is a good English teacher. We
stay at Taman Kenangan. Our house is big. My house has five rooms. I have a big
room. I have two brothers and three sisters. One of my brothers is also a doctor. I am
the youngest in my family. [76 words]
Last week, my family and I went to a shopping complex. We went to Maju Shopping
Complex. It was a new shopping complex. The complex was very big. There were many
people. We went there on Monday. It was a public holiday. My mother and sisters loved
shopping very much. My mother bought new clothes for her. My sisters bought
magazines and novels. [63 words]
My father also liked shopping. He bought a new car shampoo. It was cheap. The car
shampoo was only RM6.99 per bottle. I did not know what to buy. I just walked around
the shopping complex. The new shopping complex was very beautiful. I liked the place
a lot. After one hour, I felt tired. My father asked me to sit down on a chair. I relaxed for
twenty minutes. [70 words]
Before we went home, my mother went to a boutique. She looked at all the clothes
there. She loved the beautiful clothes. My father was angry with my mother because
she could not stop shopping. My father did not have enough money. My mother asked
my father to use his credit card. However, my father did not want to use his credit card.
Finally, I told my mother that she must stop shopping. It was time to go home. [79
words]
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At 7.00 pm, we went home. I did not buy anything. However, I was very happy to go out
with my family. My mother said she would go shopping again alone. She wanted to
spend
RM1000.00.
She
really
loved
shopping.
[40
words]
TOTAL [397 WORDS]
Seri, from Class 5 Permai, was our group leader. Seri was a very pretty girl. I liked her
so much. I knew the other boys also liked Seri. We named our group Seri Bombastic. In
the first activity, we created our groups logo, motto and song. When we presented our
song, everybody liked it. [54 words]
On the second day, we had many language games. We had spelling competition,
vocabulary game, drama and many other games. Our group won the drama
competition. We presented a very good drama. We presented a story about a princess
who fell in love with a fisherman. Seri played the role of a princess and of course I was
the poor but handsome fisherman. The activities went on until 10.00 p.m. We were very
tired but enjoyed ourselves a lot. [79 words]
On the third day we had a jungle trekking in a forest nearby the hotel. We had to climb
hills. We also had to answer many difficult questions. It was very challenging. Seri was
not feeling well. She could not walk fast. I had to walk slowly. I did not want Seri to be
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alone. Finally, we reached our destination. Seri smiled at me. She gave me her photo
and thanked me. [72 words]
I was very happy. Seri was happy too. After the language camp, Seri and I got closer.
We planned to join the language camp again next year. [27 words]
TOTAL [435 WORDS]
My uncle was also handsome. He was more handsome than my father but I was more
handsome than my uncle. In short, I was the most handsome man. I was happy to be
the most handsome man in the family. My uncle was a chronic diabetic. He was in the
hospital because his sugar level was very high. [58 words]
My uncles ward was at the second floor. The lift was very big and fast. I saw a nurse in
the lift. The nurse was my mothers old friend. She talked to my father. She told us that
my uncle was doing alright. After talking to the nurse, my father and I went to Room
515. My uncle was very happy to see my father and me. [67 words]
There was a young doctor. The doctor said that my uncle was getting better and he
could go home soon. My father talked to my uncle for one hour. I felt bored so I went out
of the room. I went to level one. I saw a young nurse. She smiled at me. I smiled at her.
She looked like Seri, my girlfriend. [63 words]
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Then, I went to the hospital caf. The caf was not big but clean. I saw the young nurse
again. She smiled at me again. The young nurse came to my table. I smiled at her. I did
not know what to say. I ate my fried rice quickly. After that I ate my burger. Later, I ate
another plate of fried rice. I did not say anything to the young nurse. [72 words]
Suddenly, the young nurse stood up and left me. She still smiled. I quickly went to
Room 515. My father was waiting for me. I said goodbye to my uncle. Then, my father
and I went home. I could not forget the young nurse. [44 words]
TOTAL [465 WORDS]
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I kissed my mother and I thanked her. I liked the party very much. At 8.45 pm, we were
ready for dinner. I sat beside Aaron, my boyfriend. He smiled at me. I smiled at him. We
looked at each other for some time. My father ordered my most favourite food chicken
chop with black pepper sauce. We also had chicken soup, pizza and fried rice. I loved
all the foods very much. To me, the restaurant had the best chicken chop in town. [84
words]
My friends also liked the foods at the restaurant. After dinner, y cousins sang a Justin
Biebers song for me. We had so much fun at the restaurant. It was really a memorable
night. [34 words]
TOTAL [423 words]
Babe is very beautiful. Babe is more beautiful than Vee. Babe is a caring woman. Babe
always helps me with my work. I always have lunch with Babe. I think Babe likes me. I
have a problem. I know Babe likes me but I do not like Babe. I do not know how to tell
her that I like Vee. [60 words]
Vee is special. Yes, Vee is not a very beautiful girl but I like her very much. I like to see
her smile. Her smile is very sweet. Vee is very caring. Vee always calls me every night.
Vee always makes sure I eat and rest well. When I have headache, Vee will give me
Panadol. Sometimes, Vee cries when she knows I have headache. [64 words]
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Vee is someone that I like. I think I want to marry her. I know she also wants to marry
me. I think I am in love. I am sure I am in love because I will miss Vee when I do not see
her for one day. I know we are more than friends because I will miss her voice if she
does not call me. [67 words]
I know it is not easy to marry Vee, someone that I like and love very much. I know I
have to work hard. I know I will need a lot of money to marry her. However, I promise to
work hard and save as much money as I can. Then, Vee will be mine. [55 words]
TOTAL [382 WORDS]
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Myself
My family
Yesterday was the last day in my old house..
I did many things at my old house
I looked at my old albums. Old memories came to me..
I wish I did not have to move. I wish I could stay at my old house.
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P2
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Myself
My family.My brother studies at UPMB College in Kuala Lumpur.
Yesterday, I went to a bus station. The bus station was crowded
I saw different kinds of people at the bus station..
I met my old friend at the bus station
I wish I do not have to send my brother to the bus station again. I do not like the
crowded bus station.
SAMPLE : (SPM 1998 ) Describe a day at school when you were unhappy
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Myself + details
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My school + details
P3
Yesterday, I was unhappy in school. I was late because I woke up late.+
details
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I forgot to bring my pocket money.+ details
P5
I was sad because my best friend was sick..+ details
P6
I wish everything will change. I hope everybody will get better so that I do not
have to experience a sad day anymore.
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Practice: Make a simple outline for your essay based on each of the questions given.
PRACTICE 1 : Power
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PRACTICE 2 : Describe a day when a famous personality visited your school.
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PRACTICE 3 : Secrets
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PRACTICE 8: Describe the last school day when you were in primary school
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