Professional Documents
Culture Documents
Mina Karavanta
5th Semester
Revision: Points to Consider When You Write & Errors to Avoid
Sources: Your papers & some of the key points made in The Elements of Style by William
Strunk Jr. & E.B.White.
1.
Despite the slightest hint of kinship with the european mind frightens him.
For Florens, to be an orphan means to have been deprived of maternal love, care and
affection. Whereas Sorrow did not add a philosophical dimension to her suffering.
Lina repeats the violence she has undergone. Initiating thus a process of exclusion that
pushes Sorrow to the margins of the community life.]
2.
Afterwards, Rebekka Vaark, sends her to find the blacksmith in hopes of saving her from
the illness that her her husband to death.
Sorrow in opposition to the distressed state of Florens, puts aside all her personal
problems thanks to the birth of her daughter.
3. Convoluted sentence (too many points in one) and inappropriate diction.
Conrads systematic exotification of the African tribe undermines the doctrine of biological
determinism and is an attempt a vignette of the African culture through aesthetics.
Or
Florens is the principal narrator, a constellation of serial confessions or deeply personal
realities, shown through the various facets of everyone involved on the estate, the first
representatives of reconstructive expropriated narratives that come to unite a highly
diversified and wild America.
[Conrads systematic exotification of the African people draw on the doctrine of biological
determinism, which constitutes the scientific roots of racism. His text also represents
African life and culture in an aesthetic context that is politically troublesome.]
3.
The participial phrase at the beginning of the sentence must refer to the
grammatical subject.
4. Do not join independent clauses with a comma. Do not use a hyphen to connect
sentences.
Achebe stresses the racism of Conrads text, he condemns him both as an author and a
person while displaying evidence of his ambiguous aesthetics and politics in both his
literary texts and letters.
5.
Keep relating words together. The subject of a sentence and the principal verb
should not, as a rule, be separated by a phrase or clause that can be transferred to the
beginning. Avoid the overuse of parenthetical sentences and place them in commas,
and not hyphens, where necessary.
Toni Morrison, in Beloved, writes about characters who have escaped from slavery but are
haunted by its heritage.
[In Beloved, Toni Morrison writes about characters who have escaped from slavery but are
haunted by its heritage.]
6. Use definite, specific, concrete language.
The Heart of Darkness by Joseph Conrad offers, according to Achebe, an epitome ground
upon which certain prejudices can thrive, undermining and assaulting the people of Africa.
In summarizing the action of a drama, poem, story or novel, use the present tense
(antecedent action should be expressed in the perfect; if in the past, by the past perfect).
9.
Do not use quotation marks when you use words ironically. Quotation marks should
be used when you cite from a text.
10.
Quoted text needs to be properly related to your text. Do not throw quotes in the
midst of your paragraphs without connecting them with your sentences. Do not use them
in parentheses as examples of your points. They need to be part of your discussion and
analysis. For example:
douard Glissant best accounts for the different referent of creolization as a web of
intercultural relations when he describes it as a new and original dimension allowing each
person to be there and elsewhere, rooted and open, lost in the mountains and free
beneath the sea, in harmony and in errantry (34); the radical and unanticipated
occurrence of the new that results from the coexistence of rootedness and errantry
signifies the idea of Relation that moves beyond the politics of a mere encounter and
their effect of the originating shock (Glissant 34). 1 Creolization carries along then into the
adventure of multilingualism and into the terrible explosion of cultures (Glissant 34 );
hence, rather than signifying the binary between dominant culture and the dependent
minor cultures, intercultural poetics is the autopoetics (Wynter 2008) of the new
communities forged beyond the dream narrative and imaginary of the sovereign nation
state as a homogeneous community linearly developed through history.
11.
Avoid beginning your sentences with And, So, But. In formal papers use: Moreover,
Hence/Thus, However and so on. Avoid ending your main clauses with prepositions.
12.
In formal papers, avoid colloquial language.
1 douard Glissant, Poetics of Relation. Trans. Betsy Wing. Ann Arbor: University of Michigan UP, 1997.
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13.
Avoid The truth is, The fact is. Simply get to your point.
14.
Avoid generalizations that you do not support with a critical examination/analysis.
For example: Natives are free spirits.
15.
Be careful with terms that you use. For instance, Florenss mother does not try to
save her daughter from the dangers of sexual harassment but from sexual abuse,
rape, and exploitation. To call this danger sexual harassment is an understatement and
an anachronism.
16.
When you use the pronoun we (we, readers for instance), be very critical.
Explain or question the collectivity of readers to which you are referring.
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