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Very thorough observations and reflections on future practices. You caught many things that I
observed. You have great thoughts and critical reflections, it is simply editing that needs work.
When you hand in your written work, make sure your spell check is on. In my version, many
underlined words should be corrected before submission. Peer; should be pluralized in many of
your sentences. A few missing joining words, or some lack of clarity in writing. I know you have
expressed this is not your strength, so try to find a peer editor for your writing that can simply
help you before you submit your work. Even teaching as a music educator, you will have to
write report card comments, letters to parents, and many other documents that need to be
edited and polished. You have great energy, talent and passion for teaching, so dont let the
writing be a road block, just see it as something you have to work on.