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Duncan C. Stone
Professor Schechter
French Revolution
06NOV17
The crux of the authors argument is that the French Army during the French
revolution was different both from the previous royal army of the French monarchy and
the Grande Armee that Napoleon would use to conquer much of Europe following the
French Revolutionary wars. Scupham argues that unlike the previous and future armies
that the French Revolutionary Army was as much a tool of politics as it was of defense,
and through the adoption of new tactics and strategy changed the way that war was
fought in Europe for the next quarter of a century. He also claims that the Army itself
mirrored the successes and failures of the revolution, and because of this the two were
inexorably linked. He concludes his argument by claiming that without the French
Revolutionary Army the fledgling French republic and the revolution itself would have
quickly failed.
history that he believes has not received much attention by historians. While the political
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and social outcomes of the French Revolution have been covered by numerous
scholars in detail, the history of the French Revolutionary Army is often overlooked by
historians. This purpose is made abundantly clear by the author who states in his
introductory paragraph that. One thing that often gets lost in the bloody tumult of the
storming of the Bastille, the execution of the king, the Terror, the rise of Napoleon and
all the rest is the way that the military influenced the revolution and was influenced by
it. (24) Therefore, the authors purpose in writing this article is to explore a piece of
history that he feels has been overlooked in favor of more famous and well-known
Who are the authors scholarly allies? If the author has a long list of scholarly
Scuphams scholarly allies in this article are fellow historians of the French
Revolution who have covered some aspect of the French Revolutionary Army in a way
extensive list of allies, I will focus on the three allies mentioned most frequently in the
articles footnotes. The first of these three allies is Owen Connelly, a fellow historian.
Connellys primary focus is the political effects of the Revolutionary Armys defeats and
victories on the French Revolutionary government. From his work Scupham draws the
conclusion that while the Revolutionary Army was essential to the preservation of the
Revolutionary government, it was also feared by the politicians as victory could remove
their government from power just as effectively as a defeat (27). Scuphams second
primary ally in the article is John Lynn, who focuses on the tactics and moral of the
French Revolutionary Army. Scupham uses Lynns arguments that the egalitarian
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nature and inexperience of the French Revolutionary Army helped to form it into a
deadly fighting force to support his own claims that the Revolutionary Army was the
driving force behind the change in tactics and strategy that swept through late
eighteenth-century Europe. The third major ally of Scupham throughout his article is
Jean Paul Bertaud, who focuses on the evolution of the French Revolutionary Army
from an unorganized rabble to a major political instrument that would ultimately usher in
Napoleon and end the revolutionary era. Scupham uses Bertaud to support his
argument that the Revolutionary Army wielded immense political power in the latter
years of the French Republic, and the fear that the republican leaders had that they
What kinds of primary sources has the author used to support her/his argument?
mainly draws support for his arguments from secondary sources. The primary sources
that he does mention in the article though are primarily letters, orders, and transcripts
from the meetings of the revolutionary government during the 1790s. Scupham seems
to have obtained these documents through either quotations from the primary source
used in a secondary source referenced elsewhere in the article (For example the
secondary source), or from edited collections of material taken from the parliamentary
Do you see any potential problems with these sources? For example, are the
sources biased? Are they not well-suited to answer the question/s the author is
trying to answer?
While the sources that Scupham uses in his article are excellent, I see a few
potential problems. To begin with, the article seems to rely too heavily on secondary
sources, as much of the evidence supporting his arguments is drawn from these
sources and not primary sources. Secondary sources are subject to an inherent bias
found in any scholarly work no matter how diligent the author is, and as Scuphams
arguments draw so heavily from these sources I think that the information that he is
referencing may have been slanted one way or the other by this bias. I would also have
liked to see some additional primary sources as I feel that their inclusion would
strengthen the arguments that Scupham is making in his article more so than the
Does the author have an awareness of any potential problems with the sources?
If so, how does she or he respond to these problems? Are you satisfied with this
response?
does not seem to be aware of the potential problems that these sources could pose to
his arguments validity. He does not make any mention that the authors of the
secondary sources that he is using could have been biased about the importance of the
French Revolutionary Army to the Republican government as this is the same point that
he himself is trying to argue throughout this article. Reading through the article, I find
this approach to be unsatisfactory. While it is fine to find documents that only support
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your argument, I would have liked to have seen several sources from opponents that
made counterpoints to the arguments presented by both Scupham and his allies. I
believe that he could have made his argument much stronger by doing this, as it would
have allowed him to provide specific examples of the Armys importance using primary
Choose two of the authors claims that you find most convincing, and explain
Although Scupham makes many interesting points throughout the article, the two
that I found to be the most convincing were the claims that the French Army and
republican government relied heavily on one another for support, and that the
eighteenth century and early nineteenth century. I find the claim that the army and
both were revolutionary in their own ways (26). The revolutionary government was a
radical institution for the time, with much of its doctrine, customs, and structure being
made up on the fly much like the command structure and organization of the
Revolutionary Army. The government depended on the army to keep the hostile nations
of Europe away from France, but also carefully considered each move that the army out
of fear that a conquering general would one day replace them, with good reason as
history has shown. I am also convinced that the French army of the time also was
responsible for the change in warfare that defined the Napoleonic period of war. As
Scupham points out, the inexperience of the soldiers and officers in drill and tactics
meant that emphasis was placed on swift, aggressive attacks that focused on closing
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with the enemy as swiftly as possible so that their advantages in drill would be
overwhelmed by sheer numbers. This method of warfare proved devastating as the later
French Revolutionary Wars show and forced the nations of Europe to develop new
strategies to match the French, with mixed results, making the French army responsible
for the changes that previously stagnant European militaries underwent during this time.
Choose two of the authors claims that you find least convincing, and explain why
In the article, there are two claims that I find to be less convincing than the other
excellent points that Scupham makes throughout the article. The first is the claim that
the French Revolutionary Army contained few competent officers in its early years.
While it is true that many French officers either fled or were executed during the
revolution, there still was a large competent core of noncommissioned and junior
officers under arms in the new force, and it was these men that would conquer much of
famous French officers in the Napoleonic wars began their careers in the French
Revolutionary Army. The second unconvincing claim that Scupham makes is that the
French people flocked to support the new Revolutionary army out of patriotic fervor or to
support their family members in the force. Instead I would claim that the reason why
support for the army was widespread was fear of invasion. Even though the revolution
may not have been popular in certain areas of France, the idea of being invaded by a
foreign power and losing the right to self-governance would have been an excellent
motivator for individuals to support the army, as it not only protected the republican
Although Scupham does not use many primary sources, and has several weak
claims in his article I find his argument that the French Revolutionary Army changed the
course of European history to be convincing for two reasons. The first reason is that
Scupham explicitly points out is the role that the army played in keeping the
revolutionary government of France in power for the first crucial years of its rule, giving
it time to develop and mature from a mob into a functioning government. The second
reason has to do with the tactics and organization of the army itself. Because the army
had few officers from the old regime in its ranks, it was able to adopt new tactics that
had been proposed prior to the revolution but never implemented, allowing French
generals such as Napoleon to change the way that war was fought and dominate the
What is the larger significance of the authors argument? In other words: why
should we care today about the topic and what the author has to say about it?
Republic is important, as scholars have covered almost every other aspect of the
French revolution in exhaustive detail, but have paid only cursory attention to the
organization that ensured that the revolution survived beyond its early stages. A deep
the revolution itself. While the French revolution may have changed the course of
Frances history, as Scupham notes in his final sentence: The Revolution was saved by
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the blood, tenacity, and merit of the Revolutionary Army, forever changing Europe in the
process (30).