Task 1

Overall, to fulfil the work experience requirement credits, it can be seen that there is a six step process
that starts with application and culminates with the submission of the final report.

To begin, students undergo three initial steps: sending an application, professors approval, and
arranging the schedule. From the approved list of workplace and arrange interview, students choose
their desired workplace and send their applications. Then, when an acceptance letter is received it is
submitted to a professor for approval. Afterwards, the applicants manage the schedule so that the
minimum work duration is 10 hours per week over 20 weeks.

After fixing the schedule, reports and evaluation are incorporated. Every Friday, interns submit a weekly
report form to their professor; moreover, during the final work week together with the supervisor
students participate in evaluation meeting after which the supervisor submits an evaluation form. Lastly,
prior to awarding the work experience credits, apprentices present a final report before the final week
of the spring term.

164 words

TASK 2

As most people spend a major part of their adult life at work, job satisfaction is an important element of
individual well-being.
What factors contribute to job satisfaction? How realistic is the expectation of job satisfaction to all
workers?

Outline

To start with, there are a number of factors that contribute to the realization of a satisfying job.

- Relatedness of the job to an employees passion

- If not, money is a good compensation
- Work environment: employer employee relationship

Provided that the factors mentioned in the preceding paragraph together with other related causes are
applied, job satisfaction can be achieved by all workers.

- Elaborate the abovementioned factors

- If people play instead of work
- Communal effort for the common good
Always use the proposition as an anchor
Every and each are always followed by a singular noun; all and different by plural.
Aim for variety

Acua
Word choice
Informal use of conjunctions (FANBOYS)
Some paragraphs lack expansion

Fernandez
Noun-pronoun misuse
Assumptions
Grind = ground =/= grounded
S-V A
Informal phrases
Expansion
Informal use of FANBOYS
Always state the overview, stand, and conclusion explicitly.

Hare
Inappropriate series construction people are becoming more dense [denser is more appropriate],
polluted, and stressful
S-V A
super comparatives more faster
Do not merge paraphrase and overview

Alcantara
Please, always write with conviction
Self-defeating transitions
Very lengthy examples

Aquino
Assumptions = subjective words/phrases
Avoid past tense, if theres no time basis provided in the task use present tense.
Use signposts and transitions