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It was in my 11th or 12th standard that I started realizing the answer to a question that I had
asked myself earlier in life as to why people study science? It was very clear that there
were deeper reasons than mere material benefits. For instance, Galileo Galilee, The
Martyr of Science, risked his life in studying science and so did Giordano Bruno, who
was burnt alive. History has had numerous such cases. I realized that they were awestruck
and fascinated by Natures beauty. It is this beauty that drove them to study science and
experiment throughout their lives and made them indifferent to the risks they faced.
Science and scientific inquiries are perpetual and continue forever as resolving one
mystery or challenge leads to another one. It is for the same reason that I find physical
sciences interesting they deal with Nature. Mechanics is particularly interesting as it
appeals directly to Nature and its study is motivated directly by Nature. My exposure to
Mechanics has transfigured my ideas and attitude towards science directly and life
indirectly. I learned from experience how important a good school is, in moulding me
towards an endless pursuit of scientific knowledge, and as a major step in this direction, I
entered IIT Madras, one of the premier technological institutes in India.
The problem which I am currently working on for my Dissertation is Steady S,tate Shear
properties of straight run and modified asphalt under the guidance of Dr. U Saravanan
and Dr. J Murali Krishnan. It involves an extensive use of the principles of continuum
mechanics and constitutive theory. Asphalt is naturally a complex material and its
mechanical behavior evolves with time which further complicates analysis. The project
consists of modeling the behavior of overshoot that is observed in its stress behavior upon
the inception of steady shear flow. An appropriate model is already picked and it is
checked for steady shear, creep and relaxation. The appropriate values of parameters in
the model are to be found. An insight into mechanical behavior of polymers is a collateral
benefit as it is required to have an understanding of polymer behavior where similar
phenomena are observed.
My main motive behind studying science is the fun and entertainment in it. So I could not
restrict my study of science only to academic subjects. Studying science always inspires
to study more science and the desire never relents. I study many scientific articles,
philosophy, a lot about history of science, cognitive neuroscience. I also study traditional
Hindu literature and Epics, particularly yoga and Vedas, with an intention to appreciate
the rigor and scientific spirit in them. With such an eye of analysis they appear to be more
beautiful than for an ordinary eye. I believe, leading a life with scientific study will help
to develop right attitude towards life, a change which at least, I could notice in me. I also
accompany my study with an active participation in sports and extracurricular activities
which help m gain a full rounded personality
The excellent academic and research atmosphere at IIT M has helped me get a broad
overview of Applied Mechanics. Flexibility in the curriculum and course structure helped
me nurture my ideas and explore the field. I feel that the next step is to pursue graduate
studies in an esteemed university. Under the guidance of my seniors, advice of professors,
careful and critical perusal of universities websites, I am highly convinced that University
of Texas is the right place for me to satiate my quest for knowledge and intellectual
growth. University of Texas, an embodiment of academic excellence, assures me a bright
future. Highly distinguished faculty, exhaustive and diversified research carried out at the
university have attracted me and influenced my decision. I am aware that it requires a lot
of commitment, perseverance and diligence on my part to successfully pursue graduate
studies which are inherent in me. (Univ of Texas where? Austin/ Arlington. Change last
line. What are your career objectives? Masters or PhD? Put some profs names that you
want to work under. You can pack the final I am looking line)
Comments:
1. Put univ name and what you are applying for at the top.
2. First para is really good - Ive just made minor grammatical changes. Do science does
not sound very good though. Study is slightly better. Better to stick to present tense
throughout though.
3. Minor grammatical changes made throughout.