Professional Documents
Culture Documents
WRITING ENGLISH,
THE LAKOUAGR
BY
MARSHALL T. BIGELOW,
AUTHOR OP "punctuation, AND OTHBB
TTPOOKAPHICAL MATTERS."
THIRD EDITION.
BOSTON:
LEE AND SHEPARD, PUBLISHERS.
NEW YORK:
CHARLES T. DILLINGHAM.
1891.
Copyright, 1886,
Bt Marshall T. Bioelow.
Uniyebsitt Pbbss:
,
mainly for the purpose of pickingevery flaw possible
in the author criticised.
teacher or by pointingout, in
scholar, an orderlyar-
rangement,
from
appropriated any source whenever they served
relating
to grammar.
The grammaticalerrors in the languageof the Bible
and of Shakespeare
are not pointedout with any idea
that they ought to be but
corrected, to show that in
forms. "
relates,
it is so though a thoroughtreatment
entitled,
of the subjectwould of itself requirea volume.
of the in
plural, which I have ventured to propose a
M. T. BIGELOW.
CHATTIB PAOI
y. '
Pronoun and Antecedent 25
XIII. Adverbs 55
CHAPTER PAGI
XVII. CONJtTNCTIONS 69
XYIII. Prepositions 72
APPENDIX.
I. Formation Plural 89
of the
93
n. Compound Words .....""
1""7
INDEX
MISTAKES
IN WRITING ENGLISH.
CHAPTER I.
"
a fleet,"etc. ; and also with a pluralsignifica-
tion
in phrases like many
"
a man,"
"
many a gem,"
"many a flower,"etc.
" 2. ^ is used before all words beginning with a
'
dog means two dogs,one black and one white. The *
'
honest and intelligent are those who are both honest
and intelligent; 'the honest and the intelligent' are
or dark."
"
Prompted by extreme he persisted
vanity, in [the]
writing
of bad verses."
**
In [the]framingof his sentences he was very exact."
"
From [the]
calling of names he proceeded to blows."
in the following
examples: "
"
That is the kind of a man of whom we are speaking."
"
**
What sort of a charm do
theypossess ?
"
**
What of
species a is this?
reptile
"
Men to whom this kind of
oi^nization has been given an
"
He is entitled to the appellation of a gentleman."
"
The one styled the Mufti is the head of the ministers of law
and religion."
He was a better mathematician
** than a linguist"
1 of
Hill's Principles Rhetoric,
p. 104.
12 MISTAKES IN WRITING ENGLISH.
**Prescott*s *
Th6 Conquest of Mexico/ and his *
The quest
Con-
"
of Peru.'
"
*'
Howells's *A Chance Acquaintance.'
"
"Cushing's *A Year in Spain.'
This* is equivalent to saying "his the book." The
section.
syllable."
lines, the ninth, eleventh, and thirteenth lines, and the tenth,
twelfth, and fourteenth lines."
"The Old and the New Testament are both believed by
Christians generally to be inspired.'
THE NOMINATIVE CASE AND THE VERB. 13
CHAPTER II.
usage : "
Langiiage,
"The conduct of the Administration towards the nies,
Colo-
and of the Commissioners at Boston,were [was]wamily
attacked."
Better,perhaps, "The conduct of the Administration to-
wai*ds the Colonies,as well as that of the Commissioners at
Boston, was warmly attacked."
Or, "The conduct of the Administration towards the Colo-
nies,
and that of the Commissioners at Boston, were warmly
attacked."
"That moment the world,and its falsestandards and prizes,
recedes and fallsinto its place."
Con'ect as follows: "That moment the world,with its false^
standards and recedes
prizes, and fallsinto its place."
require
particle, verb. As,
a plural
"
Man, woman too,craves [crave] ing,
feel-
and lifeis action,
life,
variety."
purpose and the onlydirect effect of the evidence is
"
The
[are]
to show that the witness is not to be believed."
"The letterand the of
spirit the statute is defeated."
[are]
THE NOMINATIVE CASE AND THE VERB. 15
etc.
**
for its own
Truth,and truth only,is worth seeking sake." "
**
In this mutual influence there is a wisdom,a wonderful
wisdom, which we cannot fathom."
self-command,this exertion of reason in the midst of
"This
passion, has a wonderful effect,
both to please and to persuade."
"A purpose, a design, an intention,is evident in everything."
** You create a fastidiousness,
a cravingfor the ideal, which
compelsmany of the sons of rank and fortune to become weary
wanderera in lands."
foreign
" 12. Where whether
nominatives,
two or more nected
con-
"
Not a weed nor a blade of grass loere [was]to be seen.
**
Prescott as well as Ticknor make [makes] this statement. f*
16 MISTAKES IN WRITING ENGLISH.
**
Nor eye, listening
nor ear, an object ^wd [finds]."
**
Neither character nor dialogue were [was]yet understood."
"
No monstrous height, or breadth, or length appear [appears].
* *
**
Either one or the other of them are [is] the wrong."
i n
[were] number
a large of persons of that name in the town."
**
Whatever we have,and whatever we are, above the level of
barbarism,is a matter of growth."
"To be moderate in our views,and to proceed in
temperately
the pursuitof them, are [is] the best way to insure success."
To do justly,
**
to love mercy, and to walk humbly with God,
is a duty [areduties] of universal obligation."
An offerto selland actually
'*
sellingis but one offence."
*'The only objection to the presenthalls is [are] the cross
lights which fallupon some of the wall cases."
"This and
dwelling-house the land under it is the property
soughtto be divided."
**
His illness was and
pleurisy rheumatism."
**
Behold two thirds of our company safe at their
home, telling
strangeadventures to relativesand acquaintance."
"As the words cherubim and
seraphimare plurals,
the terms cherubims and seraphims,
as the
expressing
plural, are quiteimproper."^
is often used
The pluraleffluvia as if singular;
as,
"a disagreeable
ejluvia.'*
Mussulmen is often used for the proper pluralMus-
sulmans,^
The titles Mr., Mrs.,and Miss in the pluralare spectively
re-
grain,mile, yard.
1 Dr. Rhetoric.
Campbell'sPhilosophyof
3 For the formation of the see Appendix L
plural,
20 MISTAKES IN WRITING ENGLISH.
supper."
**
Unless the reference is credited as inconsistent with the ceding
pre-
statement, we are driven to the only other alternative."
**An argument which presents an antagonist with two or
Dilemma.
*'
A strong dilemma in a desperate case.
CHAPTER III.
Felix's,
Charles's, Hastings's,witness's,duchess's.
When the singular
noun ends in ", sh,ch soft,
ce, se, or x,
the addition of the
possessive apostrophe and s makes
another syllable; as, James's,countess's, Mackintosh's,
church's, horse's,
justice's, fox's. It is therefore just
as proper to omit the plural es in Charleses, countesses,
horses,boxes,jttstices,
or churches, as to omit the '" in the
"
A largecompany attended the countess* party."
"The administratrix' sale."
**
Burns' Poems."
**
Mr. James' novel of PhilipAugustus." "
assistance."
"They relieve neither the boy'sTior the distress."
girl's
"Without any impedimentbut his own, his parents',or his
will."
guardian's
THE POSSESSIVE CASE. 23
signis annexed
the possessive
title, to the last ; as,
"
This picture of my friend's."
"A subjectof the emperor's."
"A fiiend of General Grant's."
Meaning,
"
It was one of Dr. Franklin's discoveries."
"This picturebelongingto my friend."
"
One of the emperor'ssubjects."
~
"
One of General Grant's friends."
*'A lens
photographic of seven vMihes aperture and thirty-
seven mckcs focus was procured."
"
They arrived weary and after a twenty 'milts walk."
fatigued
Either the apostropheshould be used in these cases,
or the expressionvaried so as to put the Italicized
words in the objectivecase.
CHAPTER IV.
Dickens.
"Let the sea roar, and the fulness thereof;the world,and
they[them]that dwell therein." " Psalm xcviii.7.
**
This lifehas you and / [me],
joys for
And joysthat riches ne'er could buy." " Bums.
"It was not the work of so eminent an author as him [he]to
whom it was imputed."
"
For the benefit of those whom [who]he thoughtwere his
friends."
"
"
Who [whom] should I see but my old friend !
**Thou [Thee], Nature,partial Nature,I arraign."Burns. "
"
Between you and /[me]."
"
He can read better than me [I]."ceuvi. "^^'*'
"
It was him [he]."
" "
Whom [who]do you think I am ?
" "
W?u) [whom] do you take me for ?
"
I saw a ladywhom I supposedto be she [lier]."
**
It might have been him [he]who did it."
"
Let ?ie [him]who made thee answer that." Byron. "
"
,
Let they[them]who raise the spell beware the fiend."
It must be remembered that the neuter verb has the
same case it,and that the imperative
after as before
mood the objective
requires case after it.
PRONOUN AND ANTECEDENT. 25
CHAPTER V.
1 Bain^s CompositionGrammar.
PRONOUN AND ANTECEDENT. 27
*'
When you press a watch,or pulla clock,they answer [it
answers]your questionwith precision."
"Neither Venice nor Genoa retain [retains]
the rank they[it]
once held."
"There is no evidence that either Charles I. or Charles II.
deemed it worth while
[his] their to consult the happiness
of
their [his]subjects."
"
When do we ever find a well-educated Englishmanor man
French-
embarrassed by an ignoranceof the grammar of their [his]
languages? They
respective first learn it and
practically erringly
un-
Sydney Smith.
noun of
multitude, the pronoun must be pluralor gular
sin-
accordingto the sense intended to be conveyed.
In many cases, either the singular or pluralmay be
employed,but both cannot properly be used together.
A report of a committee is hardlyever made without
violation of this rule. E. g. : "
read my return.
"Nor will anythingfurther than the I have
preparations
mentioned be resolved upon before Parliament meets, }ohichis
now fixed for the 4th of January." For "Parliament meets,"
read the meeting of Parliament.
"The man opposedme, which was anticipated."
"Be attentive,without which you will learn nothing."
"
A tremendous fallof snow rendered his departureimpossible
for days. When the roads
more than ten began to become a
littlepracticable, received
they successively news of the retreat
of the Chevalier into Scotland,then that he had abandoned the
frontiers,"
etc.
minister."
cannon," etc.
only that which Mr. Ingalls had originally held, and which he
[Mr. Smith] had obtained for almost nothing from the heirs of
CHAPTER VI.
CHAPTER VII.
^
*'
Of me the Roman peoplehave many which
pledges, I must
strive with my utmost endeavors to preserve, defend,confirm,
and redeem."
''Many authors expectthe printer to point, spell,and digest
their copy, so that it may be intelligible
to the reader."
"To shake the head, relent, and sigh, and yield."
"The most accomplished way of using books at presentis,
to serve them as some do lords, le^m their titles, "and then
brag of their acquaintance."
The active verbs see, and
hidfdare,feel, some otheis,
take
usually the infinitive
after them without the to; as,
"If he bade thee how
depart, darest thou stay?"
32 MISTAKES IN WRITING ENGLISH.
The to is erroneously
used in the following
examples
wherever it is Italicized
: "
"
I felta chillingsensation to creep over me."
'*
It cannot but be a delightful spectacle, to see a person be-
sieged
by temptationson every side to acquithimself gloriously,
and to hold out against
resolutely the most violent assaults."
**
Who bade the mud from Dives' wheel
To spurn the rays of Lazarus ? "
"
The student must not expectto alvmysfind[always
to find]
studyagreeable."
"A sufficientnumber and of
variety cases to fullyillustrate
[fullyto illustrate] the rule."
"It seems probable that this portionwas filledwith some
substance to better adapt [thebetter to adapt]it to the hand."
"A rightto exclusively [exclusivelyto]make and sell an
articlerests,"
etc.
"
To to]cleanse
thoroughly[Thoroughly and purifygarments
without injury,"
etc.
**
He has not done it,nor is he likelyto [do it]."
'*
Can a man arrive at excellence who has no [do so]?"
desire to
**
I have not written, and I do not intend to [write]."
"
When an auxiliary,or efo,is used with an ellipsis,
or instead of the verb, care should be taken that it is
such as can properlybe used with the form of the verb
elsewhere given."^
"
I did not say, as some have done [said]."
'*I surprised that
am he should leave things as he has
done [leftthtm]."
**
These relations cannot be pictured. All attempts to do so
8
34 MISTAKES IN WRITING ENGLISH.
CHAPTER VIII.
TENSE, OR TIME.
"
[drank]
I drunk his health."
**
I begun [began]to feel sleepy."
"You done well." Say,"You did well,"or "You have
done welL"
**
I saw him when he done
[did]it."
"
I intended to have written [write]to him on the subject."
"I feared that I should have lost [lose]it before I arrived at
the city."
"
Remember that you mig?U [may]fail."
**
I will not speakof it,even if I shvuld [shall]
be asked."
^''^ohave prevented[prevent] their depreciation,
the proper
course, it is would
affirmed, have been to have made [make]a
valuation of all the confiscated property."
**
an annuityupon
By charging the specific
property,he has
shown an intent that the annuitant should [shall]receive it
whenever it amid [can]be realized therefrom."
"
No sooner met their doom in the Wars of
had the nobility
the Roses,and the hands of royalty were [hadbeen]untied,
than a determined effort was made to uproot every national
Uberty."
"
Had writing
we for the English
been public,we would give
[shouldhave given] it but a paragraph ; and the quotation from
Macaulaygiven below would constitute [haveconstituted] the
substance of what we said [should have said]."
The witness testifiedthat he vjos [hadbeen]chairman of
"
only error
therein consisted [consists] in the improper use of the
**
tenn *
trade-mark.'
"The act granting the pension was not passed until long
after the war was over and the service rendered [had been
rendered]."
As,
middle."
"
He hath bore [borne] witness to his faithful servants."
"
Philosophers have often mistook [mistaken] the source of
true happiness."
"
I have chose [chosen] to follow the common arrangement."
"
They were verses torote [written] on glass."
"
He is uovf forsook [forsaken] by every
one."
reigned."
"And it would become to contradict one day what
necessary
I had u?rote [written] on the other."
36 MISTAKES IN WRITING ENGLISH.
CHAPTER IX.
^
Whitney'sEssentials of EnglishGrammar, page 119.
s
Ibid.,
page 121.
SHALL AND WILL, SHOULD AND WOULD. 37
home."
"
You will soon be twenty."
Sometimes it expresses a command ; as,
"
You will learn the next lesson to-morrow."
"
On of this,
receipt you will immediatelyreportat
head-quarters."
In questionsin the second person, mil expresses a
"
WiU you let me know if you can come 1"
In in
questions the third person, tvillinquires
con-
cerning
Shall in
interrogative
sentences in the first person
asks permission,
or inquiresas to the intention or
opinionof another;as,
"
Shall I go with you T" =
"
Do you wish me to go
"
with you 1
"
"
When shall we seeyou again?
"
"
When shall we get there %
ShaU in the second or third person expresses a ise,
prom-
a determination,
a command, or a threat ; as,
"
You shaU have these hooks to-morrow."
"
He shall go,"= "
I promisethat he shall go.'*
"
He shaU go/*i. e. whether he wishes to go or not
"
Thou Shalt not steal."
"
You shall he punishedfor this."
In the third person it is sometimes also used condi-
tionally;
as,
"
If he shall obey,it will be well for him."
or obligation. E. g. : "
^'
I would as do
readily it myselfas another
persuade
to do it."
"I should like to go to town, and would go if I
could."
"
I hoped that I should not be leftalone."
"
I know I should dislike the country."
Shotdd and would are both often used to express a
"
If he should come, you would see him."
**
I should not do so, if I were in your place."
"
I would not do so, if I were in your place."
"Should they not agree to* the what
proposals, am I
todol"
Would is often used to express a wish; as,
"
Would I were home again! "
"
I would have you think of these things."
"Would God I had died for thee,0 Absalom !"
"
Would thou hadst hearkened to my words 1 "
Also to express a custom ; as,
"
He would often talk about these things."
"
She would weep all day."
**
They that fear the Lord will seek that which is well ing
pleas-
unto him ; and they that love him shall be filledwith the
law." " Ecclus, ii. 16.
"
He that honoreth his father shall have a longlife; and he
that is obedient unto the Lord shall be a comfort to his mother.
He that feareth the Lord will honor his father and will do ser-
"
If she love me, then believe
I will die ere she shall grieve." "
George"Wither.
"If she hate me, then believe
She shall die ere I will grieve." B^n Jonson. "
"
We
toill issue this paper as occasion demands. The next
edition will be issued earlyin the spring. The size of the sheet
will be very much enlai^d,and we vrUl circulate between fifteen
and twenty thousand copies. We will have considerable adver-
tising
space, which will be allotted to i;hebusiness men of this
vicinity on very reasonable terms." Newspaper Prospectus. "
**
If we found such a system of writing history we would pro-
nounce
the division of labor in it unnatural."
"We wUl soon be able to answer this question."
pertinent
"
Unless
theycan intervene to preserve the credit of the mark,
shall soon
all faith in its integrity be destroyed."
"An order was made
supplemental mails to all European
that
steamers vnll be despatched to the steamer from the main office
after the close of the regular mail."
"
Were we writing for the Englishpublic, we would giveit
but a paragraph."
"Compel me to retire, and I shall be fallen indeed ; I would
feel myselfblighted in the eyes of all my acquaintance ; I would
''vermore liftui" my face in society ; I would burymyselfin the
SHALL AND WILL, SHOULD AND WOULD. 41
**
Perchance I will be there as soon as you." "
Com, oj
Errors, iv. 1.
'*
I tDill sooner have beard on the palm of hand
a grow my
than he shall get one on his cheek." "
.2 Henry IV,, i. 2.
**
If this passion were simply painful, we would [should] shun
'^
Let us, then, should we make a slip, possess our
CHAPTER X.
Present
the dust."
Imperfect,
"
I lay down to sleep." "
A book lay upon the
table." "Guilt lay heavy on his mind." "The sea
**
I laid myselfdown to I laid a book upon
sleep." "
Perfect
Participle,
"I had lain down to sleep." "A book had lain
"
We lie down
to-night,we lay down yesterday, our
to overlayy ^
Setting Set
Sitting Sat
1 Hill's
pp. 54, 55.
of Rhetoric,
Principles
44 MISTAKES IN WRITING ENGLISH.
.
We sit in "
a sitting-room," and not in "
a setting-
room."
USE OF THE PARTICIPLE. 45
CHAPTER XI.
"
An act for the better [of]government
regulating in Massa-
chusetts."
'*
An act for better government in Massachusetts."
regulating
"
An act for the of government,"
better regulation etc.
**
To the introducing [of] such an order of things."
**
To introducing such an order of things."
**
To the introduction of such an order of things."
**
By th" establishing [of]good laws,we secure our peace."
"
By estabUshing good laws,we secure our peace."
'*
By the establishment of good laws,"etc.
" 52. But o/ should not be used after the participle,
where the articleis not used before it. It should there-
fore
be omitted in the following
examples: "
"
From
calling ^ names theyproceededto blows."
"In formingq/* his sentences he was very exact."
**
In breakingof bread from house to house."
"They set about repairing o/thewalls."
**
Teachingo/ children is a pleasant employment."
" 53. The participle the possessive
requires case fore
be-
it where the noun itselfis the active agent; but
if the noun is a subject,
peissive the possessiveshould
not be used. E. g. : "
40 MISTAKES IN WRITING ENGLISH.
Southey.
**
It beinguttered."
wfis Coleridge. "
"
It signifies though in uncouth English,
properly, one wlio
is being beaten." Whately. "
*'
The foundation was beinglaid."
[making]."
'*
The offence attempted to be charged should be alleged under
"
The seeds of the umbrella pine, which previous to his visit
"
The storm was unfortunate in selecting a district poorly resented
rep-
CHAPTER XII.
**
This twenty years have I been with thee."
**
thoughttJiesekind of excesses indicativeof greatness."
He
"
The standard beingmore than two footabove it."
**
Three pound of goldwent to one shekel."
**
Most of the churches had one or more elder [elders]."
ruling
'*The nature of that [those] riches and [that] is
long-suifeiiug
to lead to repentance."
**
By reflecting on that which is myselfnow, and that which
was myselftwenty yeai-s ago, I discern that they are not two,
but one and the same self." " Butler's Analogy, (Insert
"selves" after two.)
**For this among other reasons the contract was executed."
(Correct, For this reason, among others,"etc.)
**
**
In this and most of our largecities." (Insert "city" after
this.)
"Between the fourth and ninth day [days]."Or, "
Between
the fourth and the ninth ^
day."
"From the fifteenth up to the nineteenth centuries tury]."
[cen-
An
adjective
pronoun in the plural, however, may
sometimes be properlyassociated with a singularnoun ;
as, our desire,"your intention,"their resignation,'
" " "
etc.
"
Two in Englishdestroy
iie"::atives 07ie another j or are lent
equiva-
"
to an affirmative. "
Murray s Rule XVI,
ChramrruvTy
**Both orators take greatlibertieswith mie another,'*
"Teachers like to see their pupilspolite to each other**
"In of
the classification words,almost all writera differfrom
each other.**
* *
A strobileis a made
pericarp up of scales which overlie each
otJier"
"Prayers,masses, and confessions followed each other with
an edifying
regularity."
"
Architecture and gardeningcannot otherwise entertain the
mind but certain agreeable
[than]by raising emotions or feel-
ings."
"
He was tickets for
selling two other railroads in addUicni to
[than]those before mentioned."
"This is none other hiU [than]the house of God, and this is
the gateof heaven."
**
Other words besides the preceding
may beginwith capitals."
"Other materials besides lead are used in the house service."
**
Pain must here signify
somethingelse besides warning."
" 59. Where comparisonsare made, care must be
taken to exclude from and include in both terms cisely
pre-
what by the
is intended, use or omission of otiier,
or an word.
equivalent As,
**
Iron is more useful than all the metals."
[other]
"A fondness for show is of all other follies the most lous."
ridicu-
**
[other]
No writings whatever so abound with bold and ani-
mated
figures as the sacred books."
This was less his case than any [other]
**
man's that ever wrote."
"The temple of Cholula was deemed more holy than any
[other] in New Sxmin."
"Of all other beings, man has certainlythe greatestreason
for gratitude."
It Is of all others [things]
"
that which most moves us."
"I think it superior to any [other] work of that nature we
have yet had."
"No [other]
sovereign
was ever so much beloved by the
people."
Nothing [else]
"
delights
me so much as the works of nature."
"He celebrates the Church of England as the nearest tion
perfec-
of all otliers[churches]."
" 60. Either and neither, " These words were merly
for-
considered to applyproperlyonly to two persons
r thingstaken and to signify
separately, one or the
ADJECTIVES AND ADJECTIVE PRONOUNS. 51
"
GeorgeP. Marsh.
"Neither of these fiveverbs can be neuter."
"Neither of the ten was there."
usage : "
^erb,is preferable
to firstly.
ADJECTIVES AND ADJECTIVE PRONOUNS. 53
Tequired;as,
**
Agreeable[Agreeably] to my promise,I now write."
"He acted in this businessbolder [more boldly] than was
expected."
**
I can never think[meanly]of him."
so very mean
**
How remarkable [remarkably]heavy it is ! "
*"
He was exceeding [exceedingly]kind to me."
**
I called on his lordshipprevious^to my leavingEngland."
"Endeavor to live hereafter suitable [suitably]
to your
station in life."
all in."
use adjective
an or an adverb after certain verbs. The
principle seems to be, that when the limiting word ex-
presses
"
The berrytastes sour." "
The flower smells sweet."
"
The man felt bad about it."
"The woman looked beautiful."
"
She looks cold." "
He feelswarm."
*
Although this use of previousiov previouslyis objectedto by
grammarians,yet it has been used by many good writers.
2 Tweed's for Common
Grammar Schools,page 111.
54 MISTAKES IN WRITING ENGLISH.
serve as adjectives;
as,
**Even rigorousciimate and other hard condi-
in the then tions
of Europe." (Omit then, and insert at that time after
"Europe.")
The then King of France was
**
engaged in waging war with
England."
The now
"
or present]
[existing copiesof the original
text are
entire."
the adjective
must be in the comparative degree,
not, as is often the case, in the ; but if more
superlative
than two are included in the comparison,the superla-
tive
must be used. E. g. : "
**
And reason mise o'er instinct as you can,
**
If the corporation was carrying on its operations under the
**
Notice the difference between the effect of this volatile acid
and [that] of a strong fixed acid when both are equally dilute."
"
He certainly preceded the coming of the tribes that formed
Tlascala."
" 70. Other errors are the vulgar use of them for
CHAPTER XIII.
ADVERBS.
**
We must not expectto find studyagreeable
always [always
agreeable]."
**
Instead of lookingcmiteinpttwuslydozen [down contemptu-
ously]
on the crooked in mind or body,we should look up thank-
fully
to God, who has made us better." *
**
Everythingfavored by goml usage is not on that accoimt to
be retained." (Place not at the beginning of the sentence. )
**
By hastycomposition we shall acquirecertainly [certAinly
acquire] a very bad style."
The comparisons
*'
are short,touchingon one pointonly [only
on one point]of resemblance."
'*
Having had once [oncehad] some prominentobjectset be-fore
lis."
**
The positive
seems called
improperlyto 6e [tobe improperly]
a de"rree."
'*In some is]
phrasesthe genitiveis only [onlythe genitive "
used."
**
This blunder is said actuallyto have [tohave actually]
curred."
oc-
*'
But every man is not called James, nor every woman Mary.'*
(Place7Mrf after "But.")
**
Most men dream, but all do not [notall]."
**
"We have often[oftenhave]occasion to speakof time."
"The words must be generally[generallybe]separatedfrom
the context."
"But it is only so [soonly]when the expression
can be verted
con-
**
It mustbe very jolly
to travel like he does." "
Hagh way,
Con-
Living and Dead,
**
So few are placedlike I was, that my audience who would
understand and enter into ray feelings
must be too limited to
trouble about." "
Ibid.,and so^mm..
*'It is like it was to be king when
struggledamong
a men
'*
And sometimes, passingthrough the ground-floor passage,
he would see her ironing,/iX;ethat firsttime." Vernon Lee, "
Miss Brown,
E. g.: "
*'
In such a [so]mild and fruitful [a]region."
**
With all due deference to such a high[sohighan]authority
on siicti a [so]very important[a]matter." Moon, Dean's "
English,
**Such a [so]lovely[a]woman," **
Sucli a [so]beautiful [a]
flower,"
etc.
^^
Quite should be used in the sense of *
entirely,'
"
never for rather or
*
very.'} ' *
**
Wounded quite[very]
severely."
**
Mr. John Redman flatteredhimself he was quitethe gentle-
man."
Say, "a perfect
gentleman."
''The conclusions drawn from a casual view are frequently
quitedifferentfrom the results of a completeinvestifi^tion."
**
The of the
acquisition power of speechis in all probability
a quiterecent occurrence."
Equallyas tffell
is often used for "
equallywell,"or
"
a.s well."
1 Hill's Principles
of Rhetoric,
p. 58.
ADVERBS. 59
"
No is often used improperly for "
not as,
;
"
1 do not know whether they are out or no." " Byron.
"
Whether he be a sinner or no, I know not." "
John ix. 25.
language."
CHAPTER XIV.
RELATIVE PRONOUNS.
sister."
"
He of the
spokelargely men and he
thingswhich [that] had
seen."
The second person denotes the person
**
or thingwhich [that]
is spokento."
**
This is the most useful art which
[that]men possess."
''The same proportionslohich [that]
are in a model
agreeahle
are in a largebuilding."
not agreeahle
"
Exactlylike so many puppets,who [which]are moved by
wires."
"They are my servants,which [whom] 1 broughtforth out of
the laud of Egypt."
''They being the agents to which [whom] this thing was
intrusted."
away under a knotted veil,whose flaps[theflaps
Hidden of
"
" "
Corrected in Moon's Bad English as follows : The rules, **
out."
**
The next error [that] I shall mention is a capital one."
*'
[that]we know
It is little of the divine perfections."
"This is the worat thing [that] could happen."
"I'here were several thiugs [which] brought it upon me."
**
We speak that [which] we do know, and testifythat [which]
we have seen." "
John iii. 11.
**
Almost all the in
irregularities the construction of any guage
lan-
says: "
**
Some authorities hold that wJw and which are to be used
thrtt were wounded were left' ; *a cloud th"at lay near the
'
horizon ; and so on. But the best English usage by no means
CHAPTER XV.
DOUBLE NEGATIVES.
"*
There can be no rules laid down, nor [and]na manner ommended."
rec-
" Sheridan.
''
I cannot [can]
stop to tellyou hardlyany of the adventures
that befellTheseus on the way to Athens." Hawthorne. "
*'
The facultiesare called into no exercise by doinga thing
merelybecause others do it,no [any]more than by believing
a
not there was not a mistake made in the name." (Omit the
second not,)
*'
We [and]do not,confine the purposes of God."
need not,nor
"I cannot by no [any]
means allow him what his argument
must prove." (Or, I can by no means allow,"etc. ) "
**
No skill could obviate, nor [and] no remedy dispel the rible
ter-
infection."
'*
Which do not continue, nor [and] are not binding/'
"The train will not stop only when the bell rings." (Omit
710^ or change only to **
except.")
"
For part I love him not, nor [and] hate him not,"
ray
"
I have not had a
moment's time hardly since I received
CHAPTER XVI.
COBBELATIYES.
f neiUter . . .
nor, whether . , .
or,
*'
As thy days,so shall thy strengthhe."
**Lawn as white as driven snow."
**
I am dehtor hoth to the Greeks and to the both
harbarians,
to the wise and to the unwise.*'
"
If I then
speakfalse, perish.*' may my father
Either he must leave,or I shall go."
**
"
Neither this man sinned,nor his parents."
**
not of prudencemerely,
These are questions, but of morals
also."
*'
Smugglingand piracywere deemed not onlynot infamous,
but even honorable."
absolutely
**
No lamb was e*er so mild as he."
poor that he could not make restitution."
"
No man was so
'*
The difference is of such a nature that it is easily
seen."
"
Though he slayme, yet will I trust in him."
"When the heart beats no more, then the lifeends."
"
Where the bee sucks, there suck I."
**
Whether of a publicor of a privatenature."
CORRELATIVES. 67
*'
or [nor]
He ueither cut, stored, sold ice at Worcester."
**
Upon the decease of either said Cynthiaaiid [or]Mary,
leavingchildren,"
etc.
"The instraraent should be a bar,both in law. or equity,
to
"He would neither give [give neitlier] wiue, nor oil, nor
money." "
Thackei-ay.
**
He neither attempted to excite
anger, nor ridicule, nor miration.*'
ad-
"I will not dispute about what can neither be [be neither]
proved nor disproved."
"
It is a good which neither depends [depends neither] on the
CHAPTER XVII.
CONJUNCTIONS.
"
Tliink no man so hut
perfect whcU [butthat]
he may err."
**
He would not believe btU what 1 was joking." (Say, that **
**
I have noted tliatwhen you wish to touch on many ent
differ-
that
details, you fare better if you adoptrapidinterrogation."
"The Master held that if,in dyeing,the
of the Rolls had
colora were so effected that whiteness could not be predicatedof
the and
selvage, that the twisted thread was mottled, red and
white,that as particular
matter of law the
trade-mark was not
DearCs English.
"
After years of labor there
he felt [that] wasvery strong
a
**It is manifestly
impos-sibleto apply the principle
to such
judgmentsas [that] A is greaterthan B."
72 MlSTAKJiS IN WKITING ENGUSH.*
CHAPTER XVIII.
PREPOSITIONS.
**
The trust refeiTed to by [in]the letter is not used in the
will."
"
that is givento
To rise beyond[above] a few."
**
Alike independent on [of] another."
"
How differentto [from] this is the lifeof Fulvia ! "
1 For the
a completesynopsisof prepositions, and a list giving
the proper ones to be used with certain words, see Mr. Loomis D.
"
^bell's exceUent Handbook of Synonyms and Prepositions.'*
PREPOSITIONS. 73
' '
The courts will not recognizethe association,
either as tween
be-
its members
againstthird parties."
or
[of]effeminacy."
I might be excused [from]taking
"
any more notice of it."
"Watch, therefore,
for ye know not [at]what hour your
Lord doth come."
"The laws of the censors have banished him [from]the
forum."
"
The act creating
militarysettlements was passed[in]the
"
same year,and it is stillin force.
"
Washingtonwas inaugurated President [on]April30,1789,
and retired to private
life[on]March 4, 1797."
"They stimulate the oiganization both of the mollusk and
[of]the creatures which form its food."
case; as,
*'
Simplesensations are said to be distinguished in quality,
[in]intensity,and in time."
"
We may have a feeling of innocence or of guilt,
of merit or
[of]demerit."
"She has been assisted by Miss Smitli,Miss Brown, and by
Miss Robinson, as well as by Messrs. Jones and Thompson."
(Omit the Italicizedby.)
: "
**
And the apostles and elders came together/or to consider of
this matter."
**
This first emotion comes at last to be awakened by the dental,
acci-
English liberty."
"
I will encounter loith Andronicus."
invention."
"The wall with the fence on top extended up above the tops
of the first-storywindows." (Omit up,)
**
Its stock then sold at and occasionally,at about that
par,
time, at a small premium." (Omit a/.)
CHAPTER XIX. .
CONSTRUCTION OF SENTENCES.
Cynthia."
**Ho was guidedby interests alwaysdifferent [from], times
some-
follows : "
Eleganceprohibits
'*
an arrangement of the sentence
that throws the emphasis on a particle, or other un-
important
"
So he as much as any of his townsmen feelsthe bnrden of
heavytaxes, and perhapsmore so. Thus we see that it is not a
few of the ])eople who must hear this burden, but all of them."
"Beak about the lengthof the cuspidate scale,or a little
longer, and twice as broad."
Those shares were
'*
purchasedby a person who had been in- structed
to bid as highas fortydollars per share,but no higher."
"
He has made
alterations in the work, and additions to it."
"
Will it be urgedthat the four Gospelsare older than tradi-
tion,
or even as old?"
''He was more beloved than Cynthia,but not so much mired."
ad-
"
He guidedby interests always different from
was those of
the community, and sometimes contrary to them."
CHAPTER XX.
**
We walked
usually ahead of the canoes, wading from one
side of the stream to the other,and back, accordingas either
shore offered the better footing."
**
One legof his trousers had become badlytattered,and, the
other beinglittlebetter, he had cut them both off at the knee."
"Give me both 0/ those books."
**
Mv brother called on me, and we both took a walk."
"Our actual life compels us to connect these ideas togetker
very often."
"They invited me to enter in."
"He combined these facts together"
higherup, in a recess, there were remains of similar
"Still
line with the lower ones."
step",but not in a straight
"There are on it now many rabbits and snakes,and in some
placesthere are now fieldsof maize ; and on the top there is a
small,ancient temple."
"
The layalone by themselves,
skulls and no other bones nor
'*
He had the candor to abandon at once his when
position Jie
was convinced that he was in error."
''At the extreme northern pointthere towers aloft the peak
of Mt. Athos."
**
Tfiere are certain features of monastic lifewhich are common
to all the monasteries.**
"A settlement of considerable had
proportions grown up
about and around it."
"
The government could show the entire history
of the fraud
from
perpetrated, firstconception the
of the scheme to its^Tta^
consummation. It is apparent from these lettersthat the
...
again"
**
We dangerof repeating
are in again the old folly of divid-
ing
our peopleinto two hostile camps."
**
Returningagain to the subject of our discussion."
"They returned inick again to the cityfrom whence they
came forth."
**
Whether he can recover back the sum thus paidis not the
questionbefore us."
"Return again,and take an oath with thee."
"
He restored it back to the owner."
with wine.")
"
Fill up the pitwith stones."
80 MISTAKES IN WRITING ENGUSH.
"
"
The l"rn was filled full of hay.
*'The canal was filled up to the level of the sarroimdiog
surface/*
**
I have got a cold."
"
I have got a better education than yoa have, because I have
worked harder for it.**
*'
Who can say,
'
I have got through learning my mother
' "
tongue, and my work is done ?
CHAPTER XXI.
This
chaptercontains remarks on some words and
phraseswhich have not been mentioned in the fore-
going
'' **
a short time since spoke of a strike among the female employes
in a certain establishment.
6
82 MISTAKES IN WRITING ENGLISE.
use it.
branch of institution,
collegiate
a the writer states of
certain mattera that they have been alluded to in former
reports,when in fact they had been elaborately cussed.
dis-
A recent writer says, "And here it is proper
to allude to a method which has recentlybeen adopted'' ;
and then goes on to givea full and elaborate account of
it. There is hardlya newspaper printedwithout simi-
lar
misuse of this word.
pain,grief,
surprise, sorrow, or anxiety.It was formerly
employedalso for the expression of a wish,and is so
used in our versions of the Bible : but the best mod-
em writers
generallyreject this last usage of the word,
and employ only 0 for that purpose. This distinction
is made by Professors Crosby and Goodwin, by Goold
Brown, and by Prof. W. D. Whitney, in their Gram- mars,
and by most of the best authors.
84 MISTAKES IN WRITING ENGLISH.
"
But oh ! as to embrace me she I waked."
inclined, " Miltmi,
**
But she is in her grave, and oh !
"
The difference to me ! Wordsioorth. "
**Oli! I am spoiled,
undone by villains." " Othello,
"
Oh ! I die,Horatio." " Hamlet.
**
How amiable thou art, 0 virtue ! "-
'*
0 for a lodgein some vast wilderness,
Some boundless contiguity
of shade." "
Covoptr,
**
O for the voice of that wild horn,
On Fontarabian echos borne ! " " ScotL
**
0 that this too, too solid flesh would melt,
"
Thaw, and resolve itselfinto a dew ! " Hamlet,
"I hope we have reformed that iQdiiferently
with us. -^0,
reform it altogether." Hamlet, "
used indiscriminately
by many writers,yet fartheris
more appropriatelyapplicableto distance only; while
any rent^
^ His wages for that periodwere
"
almost
1
p. 138.
Peabody*sConversatioD,
"
Ibid.,p. 112.
86 MISTAKES IN WRITING ENGLISH.
but a quantity
"
of books,'*or a quantity of birds," is "
wrong.
Peas, Pease. " Peas is used for seeds or plantsof
the pea, when spoken of by number; pease, for the
seeds in bulk, or by quantity.
Taste of, Smellof in these expressions
of. " is The
redundant,and should not be used. We taste a thing,
or smell a thing,
but do not taste or smell ofit.
"
from in and
opinion, its use must be left to individual
taste.
er.
writers.
APPENDIX I.
"
There are practical
some reforms which can stillbe
made in Englishby the droppingof useless silent let- ters.
Many such reforms have already been made within
the past fifty years, as the droppingof the useless silent
u in words ending in ouTy and the e after dg in words
like abridgmentand jttdgmerU, both of which reforms
are now universally acceptedin America. Both for
simplicity and uniformity I propose that the useless e
in formingthe plural of nouns enHing in i and 0, and
also the third person singular of verbs of like ending,
be droppedin all words except monosyllables. Words
like no, wo, go, and do would look very awkward if writ-
ten
without the es as b, termination. But the omission
of e in all such words of syllable
more than
would one
half,knife,
elf^ leaf life,
loafselfsheafshelfwharf
wife,SLudioolf;
as,
cilf,calves ; knife,knives ; wolf,wolves wharf,wharves.
;
COMPOUND WORDS.
wellnigh,erelong,bygone, alehouse,schoolboy,spellbound,
awestrnck,downtrodden, selfsame.
4. Where a noun is used as an a useless
adjective,
compound word should not be made; as,
top,Sunday school,supper table,slave trade,coffee
mountain
trade,minute hand, multiplication table,journeyman printer,
peasantwoman, cabbageleaf,sister cit}^brother minister,apple
tree, fellow student.
1
Many peopleeven go so far now as to write any one and every
one words.
as single But these are justas distinctly pronounced and
accented as two words as any man and every man.
94 APPENDIX.
many others,
are sometimes needlessly
compounded: "
law,law merchant,common
common sense, ill health,good
will,
free will,grandjury,North American (Review),New York
South Boston (Biidge),
(Directory), Washington Street (omnibus).
ex-president, vice-
ex-governor, rear-admiml,vice-president,
chancellor,
etc. ; but viceroy,vicegei'ent, words.
are single
chiefjustice, solicitor
attorneygeneral,governor geneitd,
lieutenant colonel,
general, second lieutenant,
etc.
8. Words kindred
expressing are compounded ; as,
step-mother, etc., greatgrandfather,
step-daughter, great-
grandson, grand-uncle,
etc. grand-aunt great-aunt,
,
o r etc.
compounded;as,
frequently
father in law, brother in law,son in law,etc., cousin german,
second cousin,etc.,foster brother, foster son, etc.
northeast, southeast,
northwest, southwest.
But the followhig
are compounded : "
north-northeast,
west-southwest,
etc.
"
Another class are compounded as follows : " '
twenty-five, twenty-fifth,
forty-nine, forty-second,
etc.
11. Compounds of
halfor qimrter (whethera fraction
half-crown, half-barrel,
half-dollar, half-way, witted,
half-
half-past,
half-price,
half-yearly, quarter-barrel,
quarter-day,
ter-face,
quar-
etc.; hut quartermaster.
quarter-deck,
12. The words /oW, scctrey penny y
and pence^ united
with numbers of one syllable,
are written as single
words; but with numbers of more than one syllable
they are compounded or written as two words : "
one-eyed,
one-armed,two-handed, two-headed,three-legged,
four-story,
four-footed,
etc.
adjective
as follows : "
dwelling-house
; bedroom,greenroom, (a^so
anteroom,)
dining-room, bedside,
dressing-room; fireside,
hillside,
river-side,
mountain-side ; churchyard,farmyard,courtyard, timber-yard,
marble-yard.
18.Compounds endingwith work are usually written
as words,unless the combination is unusual ; as,
single
groundwork,network, framework, needlework,brickwork,
ironwork,stonework ; biU mason-work,carpeut"r-work.
19. Compounds of and bush
tree,leaf, are frequently
made; but this seems unnecessary. Such words are
in the Oxford
alwaysprintedse|)arately Bibles.
schoolmate,
schoolboy, schoolfellow,
schooldame,
schoolhouse,
schoolmistress.
schoolmaster, ^
not infrequent;as,
bird's-eye,
king's-evil, bear's-foot,
crow's-nest, jew's-harp,
etc.
But many like words have become consolidated;
as,
beeswax,ratsbane,townspeople,
etc.
In a few pages of
Shakespeare's Comedy of Errors
occur the compounds of this class:
following "
"*
-5 V
,
APPENDIX III.
explanation, 'defii^tion,
authority, reference,translation,
or other matter not belongingto the sentence. They
are now seldom used except for this purpose.
1 On the 16th of
March, 27 Eiiz. 1584-5,a bill was read the first
time,in the House of Lords,entitled " An Act givingher Majesty
authorityto alter and new make a Calendar,accordingto the Calen-
dar
used in other countries." Sir Harris Nicolas. But the change
"
was not made till the year 1752. The Old Style is stillretained
in Russia and Greece,and is now twelve days behind the regular
calendar.
2 Sometimes Written 172|,
or 1724/5.
102 APPENDIX.
notes, or explanations
corrections, made by authors in
quotationsfrom others, or by editors in editingworks.
8. Quotations. " Marks of quotation(" ") are used
to indicate a passage taken from another author, or
what is said by a when
speaker, it is given in his own
words. But the marks are not used when the substance
onlyof passage is given,
a or when a speechis not given
in the first person. Double marks are generally used
for ; but
quotation
a where one quotationoccurs within
another,single
marks are used.
22. The
practice of writingthe preposition in such
names as these with a small letter prevails
to some tent.
ex-
Brackets, 102.
.
53, 54. Position of, 32, 56, 57. Compounds, 93, 94, 96, 97.
For Relative Pronouns, 62. Construction of Sentences, 14, 23,
alf,51, 52. att of, 75. 28, 29, 32, 45, 50, 56, 57, 67, 69,
allude,82. 72, 76, 77.
almost no, 85. CorrectingProofs, 100.
alternative,20. Correlatives,
66-68.
among, 73.
the thatij
. .49,50.
. \jeopardize,
85.
employeor employee^81,82.
as wellj
equally 58. last, 54.
Fractions,compomided,94,95. mistaken,85.
French words in 81,82, Money, sum of,in plural,
"nglish, requires
104. singularv erb,18.
Numbers, how
written,92,94,95, programme^ 88.
100,101, 103,104. Pronoun and Antecedent,
24-29.
Numerals, compounded,95. Pronouns,Possessive Case of,22.
ObjectiveCase of, 24. Adjec-
tive,
0 and oh ! 83, S4. 48-55.
Rehitive,
60-63.
ObjectiveCase, 24. Proofs,correcting,
100.
""/;19,45, 72-75.
oh I and 0, 83, 84. quantity for number^86.
Old and New 101.
Style, quitefor very, 58.
o^er, 86. Quotations,
102,103.
on iGt in,73.
one, one*8f51. re-. Prefix,79, 99.
one another y
49. reason because^
. .
69..
otherwise,
49. Sciences,
names of,Singular,
18.
secondjsecondly,
52.
**
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praf.tical treatment
a of the subject, and
enlarges the reading public's jations to him."
obli " Atlantic Monthly,
** It is intended for the use of teachers, while
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anil
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**
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hensive.
The errors pointed out are those to which nearly all writors
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*'
This is a valuable little volume. It is not a
grammar, with rules
and definitions ; but it takes up words and parts of speech, and shows,
generally by example, their correct use. It is arranged cally,
systemati-
and is adapted to the use of the home and the school." " The
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**
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THE BiaST WOBD IV THE UOBI FLAO".
CAMPBELL'S
WITH AN APPSNDIX.
8HOWINO
his style ara best i^own by his use of these littla hinges of the
languaize.