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This is a final independent piece of writing following a sequence of work on Augustus and His
Smile by Catherine Rayner. The story is about a tiger who has lost his smile and goes hunting for
it. The children chose their own animals, and the feature they have lost, to write a similar story.
GP = Grammar
C = Composition T = Transcription
and punctuation
Phonic knowledge from FS and Y1 is used to spell simple regular words, e.g. Words are separated with spaces.
sad, find, did, set, trees, that, but. However, there are several spelling errors
Some sentences are punctuated
which show that the full range of phonic knowledge and skills from FS and
accurately with full stops and
Y1 is not yet secure (yorn, taybl, fond/fownd, ej).
capital letters. An exclamation
Many Y1 common exception words are spelt correctly (a, he, was, his). mark emphasises the character’s
feeling at the resolution of the
Most words with simple suffixes are not spelt correctly (cacled, torct). There is
problem.
one correct use of –s (trees).
(GP)
Handwriting is generally legible, and most letters are formed correctly, but
letters are very large and some letters appear to be formed incorrectly (r, i).
(T)