The importance of English in engineering is enormous.

Knowledge of the English language and

good use of it is essential. Today, English is the most important language in the world. English is
necessary since in the working world it is a minimum requirement and more in the field of
engineering. The majority of companies that produce engineering have as a requirement the use
of the English language 67 words Commented [AKB1]: This is not a thesis statement.
Remember that it will tell the reader the information to be
developed in the next two body paragraphs

The English language is important from the beginning and that is the process of studying Commented [AKB2]: Punctuation missing

engineering. Most engineering articles, guide texts, scientific journals and terminology are in Commented [AKB3]: You need a more concrete topic
English. In fact, in Colombia it is already very common for universities of engineering classes in sentence
English or from the beginning to be linked with the knowledge of the career. This to show the
importance of language in the field of engineering. Therefore, future engineers must have the
basic command of English, which is a basic tool in teaching and learning. This has been reflected at Commented [AKB4]: These ideas are supporting, which
the end of the race, since the test must be delivered in English. 106 words need to be developed through reliable sources. It means
citation. Where did you get that information? How do you
know that, we are not writing based on assumptions.
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When you are an engineer, in the field of work, the language is essential, team work is meaning
fundamental in engineering, all work is solved as a team or the help of another engineer is
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essential and this or these may only use the language English. There are too many jobs for an coherence
electronic engineer to be an administrator or a designer and almost all that must be related to the
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language. Since to improve their studies, expand their knowledge or have a better use in the use
of the language. 90 words Commented [AKB8]: Translated idea

In general, everything that needs to be an engineer, must strive to improve their English language
skills, since it is fundamental in life and in this field of knowledge. English opens a hundred doors in
your life as in the work and education. Making you grow as a person. 49 words

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CRITERIA WORK
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Does the introduction propose a hook, a background and a x

thesis statement?
Are there 2 coherent Topic sentences? x

Are there 2 supporting ideas with examples? x

Are the authors and information sources acknowledged with x

citations?
Is the thesis restated concisely and precisely?(topic, focus and x

2 subtopics) And is there a global conclusion?

Is the grammar use appropriate for a level 4 student? Present x

perfect, infinitives, gerunds, noun clauses…

Punctuation, capitalization, use of connectors and word x

number is appropriate for a level four student?

Teacher comments:

You comply with word number, though your conclusion could have been longer.
There is no evidence on Research, you did not cite. None of your supporting ideas are evidence on your researching!
Those ideas are more assumptions. You did not copy any of the references.
You need to include vocabulary learned in the level 4, the same goes with grammar.

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