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Action Notes MAJOR STRICK and FLIT come running over the hill in the foreground.

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Action Notes Smoke rises from the crashed spaceship as CAMERA pans down. A pack of military police jeeps drive over the hill towards it, sirens flashing. Slugging

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Dialogue FLIT You should have let ME drive.

Dialogue MAJOR STRICK You're too young to have a license.

Dialogue FLIT We just stole a flying saucer--

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Action Notes Flit stops running; Major Strick gains on screen. BG stops panning.

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Dialogue FLIT (CONT'D) --and you're worried about a traffic ticket?

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Action Notes Major Strick continues running O/S.

Action Notes Major Strick stops running; turns back to Flit.

Action Notes He gets a worried look on his face as he sees the miltary police jeeps O/S.

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Dialogue MAJOR STRICK They're getting close.

Dialogue MAJOR STRICK We better split up!

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Action Notes POV of jeeps driving next to downed spaceship.

Action Notes Smoke from crashed ship rises throughout.

Action Notes Major Strick and Flit run O/S in opposite directions.

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Action Notes Miltary police jeeps appear on horizon, driving to camera.

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Action Notes Jeeps drive by camera, O/S.

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Action Notes Major Strick peers around a rock.

Action Notes Jeep drives through scene.

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Action Notes Major Strick turns his back to the rock as he breaths a sigh of relief.

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Dialogue SFX: Beeping.

Action Notes Major Strick hears a beeping sound; looks down to see it's source. Dialogue

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Dialogue MAJOR STRICK This is no time for games, kid!

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Action Notes An antenna comes up out of the dice and beeps.

Action Notes Flit looks up expectantly.

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Action Notes A BLINDING LIGHT blast on them from above. Major Strick is taken aback.

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Action Notes The pilot ZORK comes out from the spaceship hatch.

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Action Notes He tosses a rope ladder that falls toward Flit and Major Strick.

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Action Notes The end of the ladder falls down into scene.

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Dialogue ZORK Move it, fellas!

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Action Notes From behind, the military police jeeps approach.

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Action Notes A shower of bullets whizzes by Zork, one of them hitting the spacecraft.

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Dialogue ZORK (to soldiers in distance) HEY! I just washed this!

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Action Notes Zork angrily looks at the damage.

Action Notes Zork shakes fist in anger.

Action Notes He ducks back into the ship.

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Action Notes Closes hatch.

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Action Notes The rope ladder exits scene as Strick and Flit try to grab it.

Action Notes They follow it as military policemen begin pursuit.

Action Notes Ladder and ship fly away from camera.

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Action Notes Flit and Strick continue following it.

Action Notes Policemen chase.

Action Notes BG pans as Strick and Flit run.

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Action Notes Strick notices something up ahead of them.

Action Notes POV of canyon up ahead.

Camera "hops" inward to simulate Strick's running.

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Action Notes Major Strick regains focus on the ladder and doubles his efforts, gaining on screen.

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Action Notes Spacecraft flies over cliff edge.

Action Notes Strick and Flit antic down.

Action Notes They make a last leap for the ladder.

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Action Notes Major Strick and Flit lunge at the ladder. BG pans NW to SE throughout scene.s

Action Notes He successfully grabs on to one of the rungs!

Action Notes Flit catches up to him, grabing his leg and making him lose his grip.

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Action Notes He regrabs the last rung.

Action Notes Strick delivers Flit an angry glare.

Action Notes Flit gives an "I'm sorry" look.

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Action Notes Bullets fly through the air near them.

Action Notes Their eyes follow the bullets as they fly above.

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Action Notes The bullets tear through the rope ladder!

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Action Notes Rope ladder begins to fall down; BG pan eases as character movement slows.

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Action Notes Ladder drops down O/S; BG becomes static.

Action Notes Strick and Flit fall O/S.

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Action Notes Major Strick and Flit scream as they fall to certain doom.

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Action Notes WHAM! They land on top of Zork's ship.

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Action Notes Flit and Strick stare blankly, regaining their composure. BG vanishes to horizon to simulate movement of spacecraft.

Action Notes Zork opens up the hatch to let them in.

Action Notes Strick and Flit crawl inside, revealing the large dents they've put into the ship.

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Dialogue ZORK *Grunt.*

Dialogue ZORK (to Flit) That's coming out of YOUR paycheck.

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Action Notes Zork angrily realizes the damage.

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Dialogue FLIT (off-camera) As usual Zork--

Dialogue FLIT (off-camera) (CONT'D) --your timing is perfect.

Action Notes Zork closes the hatch as the ship takes off into the night sky.

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Dialogue ZORK Thank you.

So, where to, Captain?

Dialogue MAJOR STRICK Far away from those jeeps.

Action Notes Zork pilots the craft as Strick and Flit are sitting at a table and chair that are WAY too small for a human.

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Dialogue MAJOR STRICK (CONT'D) And by the way... ...I'm a MAJOR.

Dialogue FLIT Yeah...a Major pain in the butt.

Dialogue ZORK Um...

Action Notes Strick points to his insignia.

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Action Notes Major Strick crosses his arms in anger.

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Dialogue ZORK (CONT'D) I was talking to Captain Flit.

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Action Notes FLIT taps on the dice marks like they're buttons.

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Action Notes Flit climbs up on the chair.

Action Notes Truck out as a hologram of a star system appears in the air, projected from the dice. Major Strick leans back in shock.

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Dialogue FLIT Head staight for Zetamorix and turn left at Greenlux.

Dialogue MAJOR STRICK (panicked) We're going where?!

Dialogue FLIT Back to my home system.

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Dialogue FLIT (CONT'D) Relax...

Dialogue FLIT (CONT'D) --we're almost halfway there.

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Action Notes Pan over to reveal Strick at Zork's command consol, mouth agape.

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Action Notes CAMERA pulls out from front of ship.

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