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1
Original
It is shown statistically, in the past five years, the
malicious programs and tampering of
confidential data create a cost of over 75 billion
US dollars every year.
Revised
Statistics over the past five years indicate that
malicious programs and the tampering of
confidential data cost enterprises over $US
75,000,000,000 annually.
2
It is noted that the requirement of wireless
network is increasing quickly. By wireless
communication, information must be transferred
more conveniently and comfortably.
Revised
Wireless networks must transform information
efficiently and conveniently to comply with
consumer demand in wireless communications.
3
Original
It is crucial to develop a hi-speed wireless network
system. With high data rate of wireless network, the goal
of watching real-time video programs can even be
reached and we can watch TV programs everywhere
and anytime without taking cables with us.
Revised
Developing a hi-speed wireless network system with a
high data rate could greatly facilitate real-time video
transmissions and programming without conventional
constraints of place, time or cables.
4
Original
It is known that traditional distribution system
can only support the message transfer in the
mobile network. If we dont develop a new
distribution system for mobile network, we can
not communicate with each other.
Revised
Conventional distribution systems can only
transfer messages in a mobile network. The
inability to develop a distribution system for
mobile networks severely limits communications
between wireless users.
5
Original
There is a need for a context-aware algorithm,
which can make message transfer between
nodes efficiently.
Revised
A context-aware algorithm must be developed,
capable of transferring messages between
nodes efficiently.
6
Original
It is widely known that the Hsinchu City Government is
heavily promoting the use of public transportation to
alleviate the growing heavy traffic. However, the
obsolete routes and services of the public transportation,
city bus, can not meet the citizens needs that shifted as
the science park developed in recent years.
Revised
The Hsinchu City Government aggressively advocates
public transportation use to alleviate the growing traffic
congestion. However, obsolete bus routes and public
transportation have failed to satisfy consumer demand,
especially given the rapid development of the Hsinchu
Science-based Industrial Park in recent years.
7
Original
It is a normal practice that private sectors of traditional
industry file visitor information as valuable database for
relationship maintenance. However, the paper-based fail
to present systematic and updated data, causing
inefficiency in contacting with these potential customers.
Revised
Private enterprises often enter visitor information into
their databases as a form of customer relations
management. However, paper-based documentation is
often unsystematic and inefficient when identifying and
contacting potential customers.
8
Original
It is certain key information of the data, such as
e-mail address or telephone number, becomes
invalid due to the difficulty to renew the database.
Revised
The failure to upgrade database contents
invalidates outdated information, including e-
mail addresses and telephone numbers.
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